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Ayelet | Leftovers God, I wish you were here in this place of seldom which turned into often too often A miraculous bee stung me and I am on the move The joke isn't funny, tell it, tell it to stop putting its arms around my neck, I will not be choked. Is it a sea waving for me from a distance? All is white, yours and mine, yours against mine is totally free. Free of charge, that is to say, Never will I beg Neither will I take your cash It's not made to last and I am last in line anyway Feel free to love which thing will free me to leave you again |
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mirage29 | Leftover.... and it sounds like feeling Left out, too. Place between the hard rock (like a grave stone) and obtaining the satisfaction you really DO deserve, IN this lifetime. You already earned it. May you receive your blessings soon. Hugs to you, my Ayelet... {{ }} |
Pearlty | Expressing what needs to be said, through awareness with strength and decisiveness. Also pointing out specific needs that are not being met, is what I grasped from this. |
Ayelet | Mirage, thank you for your kind words! Pearlty, thank you for your reading |
LeeLoo2014 | quote: Originally posted by mirage29: Leftover.... and it sounds like feeling Left out, too. Place between the hard rock (like a grave stone) and obtaining the satisfaction you really DO deserve, IN this lifetime. You already earned it. May you receive your blessings soon.Hugs to you, my Ayelet... {{ }}
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thequeen | Very touching goes quite close to the heart. |
Ayelet | Thanks LeeLoo and thequeen! |
Swift Freeze | ------------------ Learn lots. Don't judge. Laugh for no reason. Be nice. Seek Happiness. Follow your dreams. |
mirage29 | So!....... What's your poem all about, Ayelet? {{ }} |
Ayelet | Swift Freeze, sorry if I saddened you... Mirage, these are emotions that stem from a personal experience that I had been through... a couple of years ago, which still affects me.
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tinkerbug | Beautiful |
Ayelet | Thanks |
mirage29 | {{{Ayelet }}} |
Randall | Apt for this time of year. |