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Randall | "How did you do it?" she asked. "Do what?" I replied. "Make me fall in love with you." I'm just me. It's all I can be. You're just you... ... This poem has no ending. Just. Like. Us. ... |
Eternal Energy | Don't.End. |
Ayelet | How terribly romantic. Yea, the best answer to why people genuinely fall in love. |
Voix_de_la_Mer | Ahhh the mystery of love and attraction, skilfully condensed. I enjoyed this Randall ------------------ Face a situation fearlessly, and there is no situation to face ~ Florence Scovel Shinn ~ |
Randall | Maybe I just couldn't find something that rhymes with "you." |
Voix_de_la_Mer | shoe coup view loo woo poo too new knew sue cue flu blue pew roo moo hew coo (Scottish cow) anew zoo boo goo doCome on now Randall ------------------ Face a situation fearlessly, and there is no situation to face ~ Florence Scovel Shinn ~ |
Chanterelle | 🦉That can’t be true! (I like the non-ending just fine, though.) |
Ayelet | quote: Originally posted by Randall: Maybe I just couldn't find something that rhymes with "you."
Everything happens for a reason |
Randall | It worked out me for that not having an ending became the perfect ending. |
mirage29 | That's a really nice one, Randall. |
Randall | Thank you, mirage. |
Randall | quote: Originally posted by Ayelet: Everything happens for a reason
Indeed! |