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mermaid26 | I don't know what the proper "ist" is to describe my personal belief system. I do know that I appreciate your writings. Thanks for sharing. |
Valus | Dito. Thanks for thanking. |
MysticMelody | poetry all of it but I don't understand this part yet Can we fix our hearts on a single object, person, or ideal? Perhaps. But can we fix them on the Whole? How do we fix them? Where do we drive the nails? Who wants to hang on the cross? to fix our hearts on the Whole takes sacrifice... I get that but is that all this says? |
Yin | I did see this this morning. Loved it as always. Gorgeous! |
MysticMelody | I read it on FB this morning too, Yin, but I think that was the rough copy and it tripped me up a little. It said "who wants to hang the cross?" which gave it an entirely different meaning in that section, I think, so I wasn't getting it. I did like the end a lot that time too though. |
Valus | Good Questions, Melody! My purpose is to get you to ask them, and, hopefully, to answer them. Maybe you can even answer them for me. |
Valus | I finished and went to bed before Yin read it. I posted here first.. then facebook.. then i went on to edit both of them. i think they are identical now. when i'm reading it over i see more, and say more |
MysticMelody | and make the Whole your savior... ♥ I see more too, that's why I know it is good stuff. |
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