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Topic: the things you write...
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CoralFrequency Newflake Posts: 0 From: Registered: Aug 2009
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posted November 11, 2008 06:04 PM
Ok this may sound like an odd thread..But what is the best thing you've ever had to write - in uni or college for instance or wanted to write, in general (books, stories, poems etc). By 'best', I mean your favourite. It could be just a short poem - the length doesn't matter. Post your Mercury sign/house/aspects. If you're not really a "writer" that's cool to. That could be related to Mercury anyway, so just let me know if it's not your thing. IP: Logged |
Lara Newflake Posts: 0 From: Registered: Dec 2011
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posted November 11, 2008 06:12 PM
Hey Coral,I write all the time... when l was a child l wrote lyrics and then l wrote short stories and now l write psychological and esoteric stuff. I have a blog if you'd like to see it! Here it is: http://larakatrina2008.blogspot.com/ It's kinda "out there" lol I'm Mercury in Taurus and just at present determining whether my mercury is in 10th house or 3rd house! Mercury is conjunct my sun (2deg) and makes no other aspect. I will find a couple of poems tomorrow for you. IP: Logged |
MoonPixie Knowflake Posts: 132 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted November 11, 2008 06:20 PM
We know a love in need is doomed indeed. So, darling, don't try any longer. Oh, what have we done?I am already gone. Passion and fights lost in the slaughter. Our bodies remain but our senses float. Lost what we didn't earn. You live and you learn. I've never really titled this poem. I could never think of a proper one. I entered this into a few poetry contests and won one of them. I wrote it when I was 16.
In the Creative Non-Fiction: Memoirs class I took a year ago, my super hippy teacher had us write a quick one page summary of who we were as an introductory thing for the first day of class. It was 8am and I was in a bad mood so I just wrote this: I am an independent clause. He thought it was brilliant, lol. Gemini Mercury conjunct Venus in the 9th house. Mercury is the ruler of my 9th house and Venus is my chart ruler. My Mercury only has two aspects; the other is square Pisces Mars. IP: Logged |
Kick It unregistered
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posted November 11, 2008 06:22 PM
Yes, you have a good blog Lara!IP: Logged |
Lara Newflake Posts: 0 From: Registered: Dec 2011
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posted November 11, 2008 06:44 PM
Thanks Kick it! IP: Logged |
haybelly unregistered
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posted November 11, 2008 06:48 PM
I don't write, my words never convey what I really want to say and I mess up everything. My mercury is in the 12th house and in Aries. I just don't like to write, but I don't mind reading.
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AcousticGod Knowflake Posts: 8749 From: Dublin, CA Registered: Apr 2009
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posted November 11, 2008 07:03 PM
Inside, However, cold As it is outsideSaturn Retrograde in the 1st opposing Mercury I have lots of little bits that I've written that I enjoy. The only song I've written that I always remember is: A Fine Act A fine act indeed A young girl in need of The respective of fools More foolish than herself In all of her curious ways Containing her...furious rage She seems to be in control Forever scared that someone may know The fear that lurks inside her The passion that forever hides here Nobody knows of her own private world And she fears that no one wants to Oh to be free To live life passionately And to learn to run And to learn to have fun She wants much more than this She wants much more than this She needs to be out-of-control She wants the whole wide world to know The fear that lurks inside her The passion that forever hides here Nobody knows of her own private world And she fears that no one wants to ____________________ Looking back on it now, I can safely say I was projecting myself on to the subject, which was already largely a figment of my imagination. I was imagining a certain girl's story without having ever spoken with her. IP: Logged |
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posted November 11, 2008 07:04 PM
I think some of my best writing has been various posts here on LL!!!(not this one, obviously ) MK IP: Logged |
VirgOh Knowflake Posts: 150 From: New Jersey, USA Registered: May 2009
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posted November 11, 2008 07:16 PM
What I write is not a public domain, it's for "Her eyes and her eyes only"Mercury in Virgo!!! IP: Logged |
AcousticGod Knowflake Posts: 8749 From: Dublin, CA Registered: Apr 2009
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posted November 11, 2008 07:22 PM
MK,You are a hell of a writer! IP: Logged |
Deliverance Knowflake Posts: 354 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted November 11, 2008 07:27 PM
AG, cool song, it has a Jim Morrison about feel it IP: Logged |
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posted November 11, 2008 07:45 PM
AG....I really sat and read your lyrics- love it. Totally reminds me of... well, me!! Yeah, that really hits me today. "nobody knows of her own private world and she fears that no one wants to." Very, very nice. MK IP: Logged |
swirl-kitt Knowflake Posts: 271 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted November 11, 2008 07:52 PM
Lara- I love the idea of having seperate bedrooms There are people who do that, I think it was Tim burton and Helena Bonham carter , they live in seperate houses that are connected by a tunnel or something.IP: Logged |
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posted November 11, 2008 09:26 PM
I have Mercury in Taurus in the 12th house. Mercury squre Mars, Moon opposition Mercury, the list goes on... i only have hard aspects to mercury.Poems are the hardest to write, I have difficulty finding my imagination...where is it?! I used to be imaginative as a kid but I feel like I have become a stone. Anyway, I wish I could write but I'm horrible. But I love to read and listen to what people have to say. :-) Moon Pixie, I think you're a great writer. There are so many great writers on LL I just can't remember exactly who they are. IP: Logged |
teaselbaby Newflake Posts: 5 From: Ohio Registered: Jul 2009
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posted November 11, 2008 09:42 PM
I've never thought of myself as a good writer, but I apparently wrote some entertaining things when I was in school. The only story that I remember garnering me anything more than giggles (or belly-laughter), involved writing a story featuring an inanimate object ~ we had to inject a personality into that object, and write a story around it ("A Year In the Life of a...") I was stunned when my teacher was so impressed, that she insisted on reading it to the rest of the class, and sent it to the Headmaster for a special sticker (ah, middle school ~ I had just turned eleven). I didn't enjoy the attention at all, and since then, I don't think I've written anything impressive (essays were okay, but I no longer enjoyed writing stories ~ it's like I just shut down part of my imagination). I have Mercury in Aries, conjunct Ceres/Chiron/Sun, in the sixth house. Mars is in Pisces, square my Gemini Moon/Venus ~ Mercury rules my eighth house Moon, Venus, South Node, and Vertex... My mother is the writer in the family ~ she has Mercury in Sagittarius, along with her Sun. Jupiter is in Libra, conjunct her Moon, Chiron, and Neptune. *edit. I keep journals, and there was one entry from October of 2006 that makes me smile. It was one of those times when I was just thrilled to bits with my life, and wondering "What if everything in my life really has happened as it should have?" I was in a great place emotionally, and I couldn't sleep until I'd written everything down, that had been rushing through my head. *edited again: I forgot that my Mercury is also widely squared by Saturn. IP: Logged |
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posted November 11, 2008 10:20 PM
I love to write, it is one of my strengths and always has been. Mercury in 29 deg. Sagittarius conjunct my Capricorn sun and neptune, square my Pisces mars and jupiter. 2nd house. The best thing I've written was an essay for a high school English class..it was one of those national essay writing things where you had to choose one of their topics and had to write in that booklet with lined pages...anyway, I wrote about the effects of the 9/11 attacks (this was written the schoolyear after it happened) It was rated, out of five areas like grammar, voice, etc...on a scale of 1-5: 5, 5, 5, 4.5, 5. I was WHOA, and it was selected as one of the examples they would use in their booklets in the coming years. I thought that was pretty cool. And here is something absolutely ridiculous that I wrote for fun for a Facebook group called 'Hyperbolic Lyricism' . It is supposed to be aggressive, vulgar, and exaggerated...if you're offended don't read, but it's a good laugh ayou bet ya didnt think ya'd hear from me that redneck ***** just south of KC up late, puffin that sticky green mind not straight, been tokin on it mean for years it seems, this chest holds more than a couple a **** i can hold in the whole bong when your J's on 2 hits cough choke n spit, **** you cant compete with this now know me as the high ***** , again on cloud nine ***** rock your world with just a minute of my time, ***** **** three, now you get one wish if i dont like it then nigga ya done with need to respect me, try not ta mess me i'll shank ya gut n show ya not to test the devil's lady, the darkest white ***** you ******* ever know tear you apart and every root you sow from head to toe, psychological blow ya here to know, this girl's no ho; don't take the slack i take your money, your stash, and you to hell and back sounds so aggressive when you read these rhymes i'm only ****** with your head half the time hyperbolic style, this **** goes for miles ------------------ Capricorn sun / Scorpio rising / Sagittarius moon Mercury:: Sagittarius Venus::Scorpio Mars::Pisces IP: Logged |
Lara Newflake Posts: 0 From: Registered: Dec 2011
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posted November 11, 2008 10:52 PM
Augentier - you ROCK!I love that... it's cool and funky and grOOvy and to think a Cappy sun wrote that! IP: Logged |
amowls Newflake Posts: 4 From: Falls Church, VA, USA Registered: Apr 2009
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posted November 11, 2008 10:54 PM
i had to write a 13 page paper about same sex schooling and how its bullsh*ti dont have it uploaded to the internet unfortunately. but i got an A and i felt very proud of myself because i can not write very long things (i'm all over the place and its annoying for me to have to elaborate on everything). i have Mercury rx in Aquarius in the 9th, conj Sun, trine Moon, sextile Mars, sextile Jupiter, trine ASC, sextile Saturn/Uranus, trine Chiron. IP: Logged |
CrimsonChyld unregistered
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posted November 11, 2008 11:22 PM
WOW.. I've read so much awesome poetry here. AG, MK, Lara, HSC..etc...Just amazing. When I was in the 4th grade I had ADD very bad and I would sit in class and write poetry. My teacher bought me a blank book for writing my poems in. I made a promise to myself that I would write at least one poem a year. And that lasted until I was about 19 lol.. So I wrote this very long, very deep poem about someone I had a major crush on in high school. I later found that poem in my sister's closet written out to her boyfriend and she signed her name at the bottom lol.. I'll have to look for it so I can post it here. I just found it harder and harder to write poetry now.. I chalk it up to writer's block. ------------------ "Secrets and lies can sleep from the walls of Rome if we sit hard enough on them. They are undeniably destined to come out. Tomorrow, the next day or a hundred years from now!" IP: Logged |
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posted November 11, 2008 11:36 PM
Funny I was just thinking of this recently. I write reports, according to rigid styles. Hardly hardly free range expression here. And no free time for writing, except my journal, which I prefer to keep to a short paragraph each entry.mercury is on my sun/moon midpoint, Libra 3 deg, 9th house. It sextiles uranus exactly, and mercury rules my 9th and 6th house. So I am not sure what this unlocks, because it widely squares my neptune. All foggy to me. Interestingly I will have to use it in my work (6th) and studies (9th), and I believe following a strict writing style (virgo 9th) is now very indicative of my studies. I write about social issues (11th), and very easily I stray (neptune in 12th) into dreamland. I write poetry and personal writings, but usually they don't get published because they're quite private to me (8th moon). IP: Logged |
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posted November 12, 2008 01:13 AM
I have been writing ALL MY LIFE..Since i was 14 ive held diaries of all my memorys and feelings on everything. VERY DETAILED and VERY HONEST about it all. I even write times and places and people i have met when travelling and stuff since i was 16. I have jupiter conjunct uranus in 3rd and i also have neptune conjunct my IC in 3rd. Moon in gemini in 9th. ------------------ Sun.. Cancer Moon.. Gemini Mars.. Cancer Mercury.. Cancer Venus.. Leo Ascendant....... Virgo IP: Logged |
amowls Newflake Posts: 4 From: Falls Church, VA, USA Registered: Apr 2009
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posted November 12, 2008 04:22 AM
oh right, i forgot i have a livejournal http://ghost-dance.livejournal.com the interesting things are friends only though IP: Logged |
Pearlty Knowflake Posts: 1812 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted November 12, 2008 11:58 AM
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Dulce Luna Newflake Posts: 7 From: The Asylum, NC Registered: Apr 2009
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posted November 12, 2008 12:32 PM
Oooo, I like this thread alot.I collaborated on a long fan fiction story with a friend this past summer. I know that right there sounds childish but I assure you,it was a dark comedic murder mystery with lots of loops and ironic twists. I've written alot of fics before this one but this one will probably go down as my favorite work of all time. The name of it was "Murder at Le Chateau L'Arcane" and no, Im not going to post a link. I have, Mercury in cancer/6th house Mercury sextile moon Mercury trine pluto mercury opposite neptune IP: Logged | |