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Topic: My something good
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pixelpixie Knowflake Posts: 5227 From: Ontario Canada Registered: Jun 2005
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posted July 06, 2006 03:57 AM
I might not understand The depth and the desire But I will latch onto it Like your living fire And try not to analyze the pain That comes before the loving That letting go feeling So pure and revealing You make it so easy I like to rile you up a bit Like nothing’s worth working for unless it’s imperfect And you are such a ‘perfect’ mate That fate gifted me with And of course, I never feel deserving So I mess up Even if it’s inside, it’s there And so sometimes I push you away Though you understand, finally, my say sometimes comes from the parts that don’t matter But the parts that do are vocal too Only sometimes not directly at you They are there when I glance at your lap When I give that ass a playful slap When I thank you for your clarity Even though I only wanted to talk, you see But you fix it, like my personal carpenter Nailing in my tacks with tact Might as well be crucified, you know I’ll give some back I just know what I lack Better than anyone can tell me So I stop the diatribe The lessons and woman’s ability Enough so you’ll just look at me And see my apology Clearly in my eyes And I take your hand, Woman to man We’ve been through it before I will kiss those pillow lips The same ones for all these years And my unmatched tears will still flow, Even though I know You are forever And even more If it is within, then it is without And I am without so much Your eternal optimism makes me grateful That mine is only surface but I have yours to feed from So the next time I go away Inside You know you don’t have to hide I know you’ll stay No matter how many times I go away That is durability And stability My moon is in tranquility When this arrangement is met and understood Yes, you are my something good. * my Capricorn Moon in the sixth house take on romance with another Capricorn Moon*
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D for Defiant Knowflake Posts: 1325 From: Registered: May 2006
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posted July 06, 2006 10:29 AM
pixelpixie I don't know what to say to express exactly how I really feel...all I can say right now is this is great work...you've touched and demonstrate Love in a beautifully, poeticly humane way. It is filled with Love I don't know if you like or don't like the movie "Good Will Hunting", but, you reminded me of Sean (Robin Williams) talking to Will (Matt Damon) about his late wife, and what we call "imperfections" are in fact the things we should treasure...it all depends on our own definitions of "perfection" and of "imperfection"- and when it comes to my beloved- he is human, he has his own "vices and virtues", and he is perfect to me ------------------ May not be able to get back to you...appreciate your say nevertheless...D IP: Logged |
sue g Knowflake Posts: 8591 From: former land of the leprechaun Registered: Sep 2004
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posted January 12, 2007 09:12 AM
Oh I missed this.... How could I have....? Magnificent Pixie poet one IP: Logged |
Bluemoon Knowflake Posts: 4456 From: Stafford, VA USA Registered: Feb 2005
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posted January 13, 2007 02:52 PM
Did your write this close to your time of conception???IP: Logged |
Heart--Shaped Cross Knowflake Posts: 6778 From: 11/6/78 11:38am Boston, MA Registered: Aug 2004
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posted January 15, 2007 01:54 AM
Pixie, This is good work. Really.
Anything else i say will sound trite. You humble me. s
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pixelpixie Knowflake Posts: 5227 From: Ontario Canada Registered: Jun 2005
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posted January 16, 2007 05:24 PM
Oh thank you for bumping this!Yes, I posted it again in a Cappy Moon section is soul unions. I was pregnant, but didn't know it yet. I appreciate the comment, I surely do. Love is such a simple and all at once complicated thing. Sometimes to express it, you must be both.
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future_uncertain Knowflake Posts: 2681 From: ohio Registered: Aug 2004
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posted February 03, 2007 01:08 PM
Another bump and a thumbs up.You delight us, Pixie friend! Now let's go make out! All of us. Everyone. Just the mood I'm in, I guess. I love everyone and no one but myself. Within, without and all the layers inbetween. A quietly trembling concealed mania waiting to explode. IP: Logged |
MysticMelody Moderator Posts: 3370 From: Registered: Dec 2005
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posted February 03, 2007 03:01 PM
Thanks for bumping this... I almost missed it!
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pixelpixie Knowflake Posts: 5227 From: Ontario Canada Registered: Jun 2005
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posted February 05, 2007 03:10 AM
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sinderlou Knowflake Posts: 978 From: Registered: Jan 2007
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posted February 05, 2007 07:38 AM
THis is really awesome!IP: Logged |
pixelpixie Knowflake Posts: 5227 From: Ontario Canada Registered: Jun 2005
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posted March 14, 2008 02:36 AM
Gosh It's been over a year since I saw this.I can't sleep so I am revisiting my past a bit. I like this one. I have to make time to write when there is no baby on my lap. He really is my something good. Then we make my something better together IP: Logged |