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posted May 14, 2003 12:31 PM         

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Before reading this, imagine yoursElf looking down at a guy sitting in the front of a bus, moping and wallowing in some recent sorrow/heartbreak...He's blind to all that goes on around him...and this is the advice you want to give him:
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I really know the feeling
I've had vain obsessions too
It took a shock to shake me up
Can I give the same to you?

Chrous:
Wake up, stand up
credit the sane
Take in the view
your pain's a drain

That girl who's in a doze
five rows to the rear
She trusts the world implicitly
unlike your jagged fear

Chorus

She won't be there forever
she has been left before
Why should she dare, a chance to care
Her heart's still on the floor

Chorus

Why do you focus energy?
fixate on one ideal
She might be what your seeking
don't waste this time, she's real....

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-K
"Most people love with restraint
As if they were someday to hate
We hated gently, carefully
As if we were someday to love"-Venus Trines at Midnight

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posted May 14, 2003 01:02 PM         

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"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark

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posted May 16, 2003 09:03 PM         

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wow, nice!

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posted May 16, 2003 10:54 PM         

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Thanks Randall and jjjax,

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-K
"Most people love with restraint
As if they were someday to hate
We hated gently, carefully
As if we were someday to love"-Venus Trines at Midnight

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posted May 19, 2003 01:01 AM         

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I like how you set the scene before it begins.

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"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark

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posted May 20, 2003 05:09 PM         

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Your intro really made the lyrics come alive!

juniperb

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