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Topic: bleh
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ally
Knowflake Posts: 268
From: U.S.
Registered: Jun 2003
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posted June 24, 2003 04:15 AM
 
I was reading some of the poetry here and I thought 'wow,these are crap',then I realized that mine aren't any better.
*sad pouty face*
hehe,I'm so mean.
Pink Ballerinas
Attacking bones
And flesh with tattoos
Melted,branded and tasting like wine;
attack of the pink-ballerina eaters
using blood like crimson war-paint
Slipping,sipping so close to their lips
and tasting like wine.
Eyes like shadows,glancing at the corners
and pokey gates
Roses trapped within glass
painted like a body
that sucks in pink ballerinas
and eats them
because they taste like wine.
Absorbing their innocence
like corsets that are too tight
So hard to breathe,eyes rolling back,
Attack of the pink-ballerina eaters.
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hrj777
Knowflake Posts: 611
From: Anywhere, nowhere ...
Registered: Dec 2002
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posted June 24, 2003 09:43 AM
Ally,What is one man's crap is another man's fertilizer!! Heidi  IP: Logged |
ally
Knowflake Posts: 268
From: U.S.
Registered: Jun 2003
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posted June 24, 2003 04:16 PM
lol!  IP: Logged |
dafremen
Knowflake Posts: 538
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Registered: Nov 2002
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posted June 24, 2003 04:55 PM
I was suprised and somewhat pleased to see someone so at ease with their ignorance of literature. Well, YOU know who you are and don't let them tell you any different dear! Daf
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ally
Knowflake Posts: 268
From: U.S.
Registered: Jun 2003
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posted June 24, 2003 06:30 PM
Aww.Did I hurt your feelings? I actually liked ALOT of your poetry,and I read almost all of your posts. I'm sorry *hugs,hugs*IP: Logged |
juniperb
Moderator Posts: 3936
From: www.Heaven.Home
Registered: Mar 2002
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posted June 24, 2003 09:54 PM
Welcome Ally  I hope you enjoy this forum of sharing and caring.  juniperb  IP: Logged |
dafremen
Knowflake Posts: 538
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Registered: Nov 2002
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posted June 25, 2003 12:14 AM
Actually I assumed you were kidding so I thought that maybe a return stroke was in order. Entertainment is the name of my game chicklette. IP: Logged |
ally
Knowflake Posts: 268
From: U.S.
Registered: Jun 2003
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posted June 25, 2003 08:14 PM
Chicklette? heheheIP: Logged |
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