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Topic: A Piece/Peace
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pixelpixie Knowflake Posts: 100 From: ON Canada Registered: Apr 2009
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posted September 24, 2004 08:20 PM
Shallow valleys and grand divides. Grant me a piece.. I mean peace. Water can be shallow, it depends upon the chalice, entirely upon the container which contains and retains a sense of purpose or delusion and sometimes intrusion. Shallow rivers forged with deep oars that scar the bottom of the river's bed. Sometimes a raging fire entertains on the shore and sometimes the water feels a deep need to smoulder the flames force them back before one is consumed and the other reduced to steam.If I had a gentle voice I would use it If I had the strongest words I would use them too. Tools to stain the air so you'd see it. Or I'd see it, hovering in front of both of us. A great and tough and powerful smashing of words thrusting through the air between us. Not in attack. But in greeting. In resolute but fleeting, meeting. Just to show I understand..... Which is why I kiss deeply and fling forgiveness with one full set of lips and cling and caress with my hands, maybe sting a little with my fingertips If only I didn't understand...... We have broken the container before we truly drank of it. The water wasn't pure, it's true. But ......... neither was I and neither were you. IP: Logged |
paras unregistered
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posted September 26, 2004 09:58 PM
Don't think your words go unnoticed, Pix. quote: If I had the strongest words I would use them too. Tools to stain the air so you'd see it.
Powerful! I love it! IP: Logged |
pixelpixie Knowflake Posts: 100 From: ON Canada Registered: Apr 2009
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posted September 27, 2004 12:00 AM
Thanks Paras, You are my champion on this board! I've been busy, I hope your world is fabulous! Hurry up and post more of your poetry, I think your words are powerful too. Every once and a while, It Flows, You know?IP: Logged |
juniperb Moderator Posts: 1749 From: Blue Star Kachina Registered: Apr 2009
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posted September 27, 2004 12:29 AM
Inspiration comes from the heart? ------------------ If having a soul means being able to feel love and loyalty and gratitude, then animals are better off than a lot of humans. ~James Herriot IP: Logged |
LibraSparkle unregistered
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posted September 27, 2004 12:35 AM
Fabulous, as usual, darlin' IP: Logged |
26taurus unregistered
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posted September 27, 2004 12:41 AM
Indeed!!!! You have such talent with words pix! IP: Logged |
pixelpixie Knowflake Posts: 100 From: ON Canada Registered: Apr 2009
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posted April 25, 2011 11:51 PM
a revisit.IP: Logged |