Posts: 136
From: Australia
Registered: Sep 2004

posted December 08, 2006 02:38 PM         

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Somewhere our small universes touch
when you are and I'm not sleeping much,
satin murmurs, the darkness fusses
and your appearance, like a wave, surpasses.
In the shell of your belly button, summer is wintering,
you keep crumbs of sun for us,
your touch and desire start rhyming... when you like a wave caress.
The silver of December plots a ring for your finger,
downwards your hand a star is falling,
To no avail I hold you so tight,
You, like a wave, linger...
Don't leave salty clear drops here,
you've already swarmed smells through the air,
leaving delusive deposit full of foam,
In the heart of this broken stone...
Nothing else matters anymore...
The face of Earth, evil and false, opens the door,
and everyone becomes sand, abject and tiny, under us sore...

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Posts: 10639
From: the stars
Registered: Jun 2004

posted December 09, 2006 01:19 AM         

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you are one seriously talented poet, greycat.

i love your writing. especially this one.

thanks for sharing that with us.

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From: The big C... Canada :)
Registered: Jul 2006

posted December 09, 2006 09:33 AM         

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WOW.

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From: piopolis, quebec canada
Registered: Jul 2005

posted December 09, 2006 11:37 AM         

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Greycat..Simply Amazing!

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Posts: 136
From: Australia
Registered: Sep 2004

posted December 10, 2006 11:16 AM         

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wow thank you guys I didn't expect this. greatly appreciated!

Love to you all!

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From: Never Never Land
Registered: Oct 2006

posted December 10, 2006 02:36 PM         

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This is sooo beautiful! You're awesome!

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