posted February 16, 2007 08:30 PM              

and how did little ben die??

ohh, and as to the story :

first of all, the plot is amazing. i mean everything- the whole story, the theme, the way u planned to narrate it...its just fabulous. i'm guessing that this is not your first short story if that's the case, where r the others? and if not, then u r amazingly talented.

then your powers of observation, as well as your photographic way of describing it, i love it !! it is as if i can actually see the drama unfold.

then also your understanding of the human psyche...how people think, and behave under certain circumstances, how they react, your delineation of the characters, its very insightful.

I am convinced now that you should not let your talent go waste. and please please complete the story. and get it published !!!!

ILWL

posted February 17, 2007 01:18 AM            

i think it is bound to get finished sooner or later.

i'm glad you like it.

i like it too.

love
hsc