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Topic: Gun Fun
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fieryscales Moderator Posts: 925 From: My own private world Registered: Jan 2008
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posted August 05, 2008 12:04 PM
Let me pick up this gun and let’s see what fun I can have with this toy that’s mainly played by the boys.The deed creeps through late at night when I am lying in bed and there’s no light to show me there’s a better way to survive until the next day. I lie in bed with the gun in my hand as I wait for the demand to do the shooting. Then I ask myself “ What are you doing!” as the gun faces the victim and I’m wishing it would evaporate in front of him. I fall into a deeper and deeper slumber as the sound of thunder erupts and red rain falls from the back of my brain onto the white floor. I have seen it all before. My death isn’t caused by anyone but me. What will be, will be. The deed creeps through late at night when there is no light. The gun’s cold mouth is in mine and an empty bottle of wine. What am I waiting for? Not another day, that is for sure. Three, two, one and the deed is done.
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sunshine_lion Knowflake Posts: 353 From: ann arbor mi Registered: Apr 2008
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posted August 05, 2008 05:16 PM
I hear you.I feel you. Please don't feel that way. Please don't. IP: Logged |
fieryscales Moderator Posts: 925 From: My own private world Registered: Jan 2008
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posted August 05, 2008 07:10 PM
I dont think I have met you yet SL. Welcome IP: Logged |
charmainec Moderator Posts: 520 From: S.A Registered: Dec 2007
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posted August 07, 2008 04:18 AM
WoW,nice one Fiery! Makes one think...------------------ What lies behind us, and what lies before us are tiny matters compared to what lies within us ~Ralph Waldo Emerson IP: Logged |
fieryscales Moderator Posts: 925 From: My own private world Registered: Jan 2008
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posted August 08, 2008 09:14 AM
Thanks for the wonderful compliment charIP: Logged |
sunshine_lion Knowflake Posts: 353 From: ann arbor mi Registered: Apr 2008
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posted August 08, 2008 10:57 AM
hi there fieryscales...I love your poetry. You have talent. nice to meet you and thanks for the welcome.IP: Logged |
fieryscales Moderator Posts: 925 From: My own private world Registered: Jan 2008
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posted August 08, 2008 07:21 PM
Thank you sunshine, that means alot ot me.IP: Logged |
NosiS Moderator Posts: 1351 From: ) Registered: Apr 2004
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posted September 11, 2008 04:06 PM
Very powerful stuff.Follow thy quill, sir. Follow it well. IP: Logged |