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Swift Freeze
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posted January 16, 2013 07:04 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Swift Freeze     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Floating down the paths of grey,
careful treading between light and dark.
forever bound to wander here,
watching over those who fall,
or those who do over reach.

Floating down the paths of grey,
there is no dark that covers,
there is no light that shines,
forever bound to live in twilight,
betwixt the realms of day and night.

Bare the light, so bright it shines,
I shy away so as not to be seen,
Bare the darkness, so empty it looms,
I shy away so as not to stand out.
For if I am not anonymous, I am rejected.

Floating down the paths of grey,
whispered words of silent support.
The hand that steadies never seen,
the shoulder to cry on never felt,
A stumble, a catch, never realised.

Floating down the paths of grey,
always there to help those in need.
Gently nudging them back to light,
helping them to find their path,
Wherever it may lead, and wherever they may follow.

I am a mirror for the soul to see,
All that lies inside its’ depths.
The pain, the truth, the choice?
So the truth is shown, so you may decide,
To run away, or gaze anon?

It is not my place in the paths of grey,
to ask you if you’d change your ways.
But I will be here, day after day,
awaiting your decision to go, or to stay,
silently listening for what you say.

And though I give hope to you,
I keep none, for myself.

Thank you for taking the time to read, as always.

Have a wonderful day.

- Chris

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Learn lots. Don't judge. Laugh for no reason. Be nice. Seek Happiness. Follow your dreams.

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mirage29
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posted January 16, 2013 04:11 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for mirage29     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Swift Freeze... that is sooo beautiful!

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Thankyou very kindly Faith, and Swift Freeze

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Faith
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posted January 16, 2013 04:49 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Faith     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Brilliant, both of you.

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Swift Freeze
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posted January 17, 2013 09:19 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Swift Freeze     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
You are both very kind, thank you.

- Chris

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Faith
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posted January 17, 2013 10:13 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Faith     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Chris,

You're a nice guy and deserve a polite response to your work...but I really said it out of honesty more than kindness. It is emphatically good. You really have a gift.


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Swift Freeze
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posted January 18, 2013 05:21 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Swift Freeze     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Haha, okay Faith. Sorry... just another Saturn-Mercury-Moon T Square here. You know how it is... =)

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