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Topic: Distracted By Daylight
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Heart--Shaped Cross
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Registered: Nov 2010
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posted April 17, 2013 09:52 AM
  
distracted by daylight
i've wandered in the green
forgetting my soul
until nowthe golden tablet dissolves
submerged in a bath of trees
and spreads like fine powder
magenta in the sky silvered night rises
a trembling steeple within me
to pierce with hopeful longing
the flesh of my poor heart and all the world is flesh
cooling underneath the sky
quiet and deep and full
of more than human feeling but you my love are spirit
never gathered nor dispersed
everpresent, undiscovered
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taureau20
Knowflake Posts: 83
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Registered: Dec 2012
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posted April 17, 2013 01:51 PM
I remember Eliot's evening etherized upon a table in the penultimate stanza. Sublime ideas and images from the 3rd stanza onwards... Image of the sun as being a golden tablet (I have it correct I hope?) is very good....IP: Logged |
Heart--Shaped Cross
Knowflake Posts: 207
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posted April 17, 2013 04:02 PM
Thanks. The setting sun, yes.IP: Logged |
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