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Topic: I Wish You Were Here
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thequeen Knowflake Posts: 2164 From: India Registered: Sep 2014
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posted December 25, 2015 02:52 PM
The night seems cold, The hands are blue, I am shivering in days, In the thoughts of you, There are questions alive, There are moments so rare, I preserve you my angel, I wish you were here, I market my words, People listen and laugh, As does mocking a bird, And the drunken staff, I can hold you in my arms, And recite so many prayers, I am speaking it again, Yes, I wish you were here…I have no wishes to spare, My Angel, I wish you were here .. IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 60523 From: Saturn next to Charmaine Registered: Apr 2009
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posted December 26, 2015 06:45 PM
Awesome.IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 4578 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted December 27, 2015 12:47 AM
T.Q. ...((Did you change the poem?, or am I imagining? )) Read Christmas Day when you posted, but for whatever reason, I couldn't leave a comment yet. Love your work. So glad "that you're here"...! IP: Logged |
Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 1217 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted December 27, 2015 03:18 AM
May your prayer be answered. Beautifully woven.IP: Logged |
thequeen Knowflake Posts: 2164 From: India Registered: Sep 2014
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posted December 27, 2015 11:48 AM
Thank you for reading, No mirage, I didn't modify it, it's all the same since first written. Thank you Randall. TY Ayelet for your wishes. IP: Logged |
Faith Knowflake Posts: 14682 From: Bella's Hair Salon Registered: Jul 2011
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posted December 27, 2015 01:01 PM
quote: Originally posted by Ayelet: May your prayer be answered. Beautifully woven.
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mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 4578 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted December 27, 2015 02:38 PM
quote: Originally posted by Ayelet: May your prayer be answered. Beautifully woven.
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Pearlty Moderator Posts: 1206 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted December 28, 2015 12:55 PM
Warmly written and delicate.. love this thequeen.
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thequeen Knowflake Posts: 2164 From: India Registered: Sep 2014
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posted December 28, 2015 03:02 PM
Ty Faith, mirage and Pearlty for reading and your wishes.IP: Logged |