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From: Paraguay
Registered: Sep 2014

posted January 15, 2017 11:23 PM            

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I often have forgotten
How sweet life can be
And now once again baby
Life flows back for me
I felt a whirlwind deep inside
And I went ahead against the tides
I knew when I saw you
Tomorrow will be just fine

Well the world is crazy
Dreadful and so unfair
It feels like soon will be over
We may soon stop to care
Yes today is a failure
We cannot have a rest
Yet I know as you smile at me
Tomorrow will be just fine

How much can one love
Without letting your soul to be free
How much can we have now?
Well as much as we let it be
You made me feel it’s all right
The sun shines back at me
No matter if this love can’t last
Tomorrow will be just fine

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From: From a galaxy, far, far away...
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posted January 16, 2017 05:31 PM            

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Love the last line each stanza.

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posted January 16, 2017 11:41 PM            

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You are steadfast....

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posted January 17, 2017 01:03 PM            

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Indeed.

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posted January 17, 2017 09:01 PM            

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Cool and optimistic poem. I liked your statement that she gave you the sense that whatever happens, it will turn out for the best...

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