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aurora Knowflake Posts: 104 From: England Registered: Nov 2001
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posted November 29, 2001 05:42 PM
I would like to share with you something I wrote for my girlfriend last year sometimes, when you are looking at her face, you swear you can taste the moment, hear every small explosion behind your eyes, feel the world contracting to the size of a pinprick and your pupils expanding, becoming huge with the pure loveliness of her. and it just gets more and more delicious..one second can feel like a decade when you are staring into those vast azure eyes, exquisite cerulean oceans, melting into a face so perfectly beautiful you feel you could die, right there, surrounded by the moment, the transcendence of her, and never wish, never need to see another sight. you have seen it all when you have gazed unflinchingly upon such beauty. and her skin, clear as an undisturbed lake, soft as that one cloud infiltrating a sweltering sapphire sky. touching it, sending a thousand tiny electric shocks straight to your heart, your soul, feeling the spaces behind your eyes sting, fill with tears of joy, inspiration, wonder, love. now I know exactly how shakespeare felt about the person he wrote his sonnets for.. I love you kelly, I owe you my life, and every single moment I can possibly spend making you happy. every cell in my body is yours, my heart, soul, mind, every single thought I have is permeated by you. you have made my life complete, and I will spend the rest of it loving you unconditionally, making sure your days are blissful, your nights intoxicating, and your dreams sweet. there is no-one but you.
------------------ Look up at the peach flavoured clouds at sunset..feel them melting on your tongue..and wonder at the sheer joy of the universe..and its simplest pleasures.. IP: Logged |
Morning Storm Knowflake Posts: 1778 From: Columbus, GA USA Registered: May 2001
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posted November 30, 2001 01:55 PM
With...With words, he soothed her With thoughts, he excited her With gifts, he bestowed her With ideas, he thrilled her With descriptions, he tantalized her With innuendo, he teased her With imagination, he mesmerized her With sensuality, he titillated her With praise, he cherished her With eagerness, he consumed her With loving eyes, he beheld her With tuned ears, he heard her With strong arms, he encased her With a sensitive nose, he breathed her With quiet hands, he explored her With soft lips, he kissed her ~Author Unknown--it was sent to me in an email ------------------ somehow, never again needing to speak the eyes-into-eyes, like burning embers, were enough we did not again need words ......Linda Goodman in Gooberz IP: Logged |
VenusWarriorPrincess Knowflake Posts: 303 From: Beach Registered: Jul 2002
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posted July 11, 2002 02:37 AM
Wow Aurora, Nice work! Beautiful, Intense, Passionate and Sensual! Your expressive words brought me back to a recent date I had with someone special where all those sensations were present. We thought we would set the restaurant on fire with all that heated bliss! lol Who ever said a Libra and a Cappie can't be magical and sensual together? Not the case with us anyway. Heehee Anyway, being a Venus child having Venus in my sun and moon, I thought I was the only one on the planet with that kind of sensual/sexual intensity. lol Even though I am typically casual and laid back, most people seem to be threatened or afraid of my intensity and Real-ness. Go figure! Hmmm... Perhaps I should open up a new topic!
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VenusWarriorPrincess Knowflake Posts: 303 From: Beach Registered: Jul 2002
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posted July 11, 2002 02:48 AM
Hey Morning Storm, Wouldn't it be truly amazing if all relationships were based on that concept? I have been all those things to other people I've been in relationships with, but rarely have I gotten any of it in return. Perhaps now is the time to ask your wisdom on my natal chart and figure out what the heck is going on! lolIP: Logged |
VenusWarriorPrincess Knowflake Posts: 303 From: Beach Registered: Jul 2002
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posted July 11, 2002 02:51 AM
Hey Morning Storm, Wouldn't it be truly amazing if all relationships were based on that concept? I have been all those things to other people I've been in relationships with, but rarely have I gotten any of it in return. Perhaps now is the time to ask your wisdom on my natal chart and figure out what the heck is going on! lolIP: Logged |
VenusWarriorPrincess Knowflake Posts: 303 From: Beach Registered: Jul 2002
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posted July 11, 2002 02:52 AM
Hey Morning Storm, Wouldn't it be truly amazing if all relationships were based on that concept? I have been all those things to other people I've been in relationships with, but rarely have I gotten any of it in return. Perhaps now is the time to ask your wisdom on my natal chart and figure out what the heck is going on! lolIP: Logged |
VenusWarriorPrincess Knowflake Posts: 303 From: Beach Registered: Jul 2002
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posted July 11, 2002 02:53 AM
Hey Morning Storm, Wouldn't it be truly amazing if all relationships were based on that concept? I have been all those things to other people I've been in relationships with, but rarely have I gotten any of it in return. Perhaps now is the time to ask your wisdom on my natal chart and figure out what the heck is going on! lolIP: Logged |
VenusWarriorPrincess Knowflake Posts: 303 From: Beach Registered: Jul 2002
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posted July 11, 2002 03:03 AM
Gee, Does anyone know WHY my post is doing multiple posts? (scratching my head) Using the back browser to re-access the prevoius page perhaps??IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 16464 From: Columbus, GA USA Registered: Nov 2000
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posted July 11, 2002 06:51 AM
It happens sometimes, Venus. We call it a HICCUP! You just had a bad case of the HICCUPS! ------------------ "He who is devoid of the power to forgive is devoid of the power to love." Martin Luther King, Jr. IP: Logged |
VenusWarriorPrincess Knowflake Posts: 303 From: Beach Registered: Jul 2002
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posted July 11, 2002 11:29 AM
Thanks Randall! I didn't want anyone to think I was being pompous! Ha ha...IP: Logged | |