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From: Rochester, New York USA
Registered: Oct 2002

posted October 20, 2002 12:03 AM         

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Destiny(copyrighted)

You and I will meet again
In another time and place
It may not be this lifetime;
We might wear a different face

It seems like it's forever
Yet we know it's worth the wait
The time we've shared together
Has been more than just mere fate

Nothing that can be explained
You are here within my soul
Know when our hands barely touched
Our vast love had deemed us whole

So...

Until that destined morning
When by way of kindled night
I'm holding you my Precious
And we're dancing in the light

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From: USA
Registered: Nov 2001

posted October 21, 2002 03:20 PM         

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I love it! What lingering phrases....
Almost like a song....

Keep up the good work, Sagaquari.

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-K
"Most people love with restraint
As if they were someday to hate
We hated gently, carefully
As if we were someday to love"-Venus Trines at Midnight

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From: Neptune, Milky Way, Universe
Registered: Jun 2002

posted October 21, 2002 04:12 PM         

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Welcome, Sagaquari!

thanks for the poem... As Amber said, it would make a good song!

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From: King Arthur's Camelot
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posted October 21, 2002 09:07 PM         

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Thats was beautiful!

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From: Rochester, New York USA
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posted October 22, 2002 08:29 AM         

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Thank you, very much!

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From: Belfast, Ireland
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posted October 24, 2002 11:57 AM         

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Yeah! Great poem.

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From: The Mists of Avalon
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posted October 25, 2002 05:26 PM         

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Oh that one hits home. Beautiful work!

Hopeful

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From: El Lay, the Reel World
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posted November 15, 2002 11:15 AM         

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