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darkdreamer
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From: Germany
Registered: Aug 2006

posted August 30, 2006 12:10 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for darkdreamer     Edit/Delete Message
This is a little piece of poetry, I wrote for the one, I thought was the ONE. I just found it today again and wanted to share it.


Song for my muse

You have been away for far too long.
How could you leave me on my own?
In a nightmare without your song?
Under a sky where no star shone?

In this valley drowned in tears
Excluded from heaven`s bliss
through the veil of unfeeling fears
I needed your life warming kiss.

But fate`s forces tore us apart,
wouldn`t let me get near to you.
Deathly steel pierced through my heart
like a flash out of the blue.

My muse, I know you are still there.
I know I shall find you one day.
Tell me, there`s still joy somewhere.
Tell me, the cold will go away.

In this valley drowned in tears
I hunger for heaven`s bliss.
And through the choke of fate`s tight squeeze
I still need your warming kiss.

And this one describes, what I felt (or feel?) for him.

He
He`s the last I`m thinking of,
when I fall into the night.
He`s the first I`m dreaming of
in the dawning of the light.

He`s my calm, my hurricane.
He`s my joy and he`s my pain.
He`s my ruin, my release.
He`s my cure and my disease.

He`s my smile and he`s my cry.
He`s my peace and my desire.
He`s my curse and he`s my praise.
He`s my night and he`s my day.

He`s the air I need to breathe;
the water to cool my sou.
He`s the fire that burns my heart.
He`s the end and he`s the start.

DD


DD


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Wednesday
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Posts: 288
From: The big C... Canada :)
Registered: Jul 2006

posted September 02, 2006 10:05 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Wednesday     Edit/Delete Message
Beautiful!

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Lialei
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posted September 02, 2006 12:23 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Lialei     Edit/Delete Message
very heartfelt

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pisces_girl
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From: Australia
Registered: May 2005

posted September 03, 2006 02:38 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for pisces_girl     Edit/Delete Message
that's amazing... I really felt connected with what you have written. keep it up!

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darkdreamer
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Posts: 44
From: Germany
Registered: Aug 2006

posted September 03, 2006 06:07 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for darkdreamer     Edit/Delete Message
Thank you for your nice replies!
That kind of feedback means a lot to me.


DD

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breakfast on pluto
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Registered: Apr 2006

posted September 03, 2006 03:13 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for breakfast on pluto     Edit/Delete Message
brrrraaaaavoooooo!

you should write a poem book!!i can publish it for you

take care....

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darkdreamer
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Posts: 44
From: Germany
Registered: Aug 2006

posted September 07, 2006 05:55 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for darkdreamer     Edit/Delete Message
Well, breakfast on pluto,

thank you for your kind words.

And actually I have written a lot of poems over the last years.
Actually I can`t believe that I have been writing over 300 poems for the very same man. lol

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Charlotte
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From: Music City, USA
Registered: Apr 2004

posted September 08, 2006 05:00 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Charlotte     Edit/Delete Message
WOW! LOVELY...

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