posted August 20, 2015 01:14 AM            

I don't really need one in return though, I only have one question.

I just want to know what is wrong with the second story I am writing. It is frustrating and discouraging to see poor writing without plots getting way more comments than my work, and makes me wonder if I need to dumb down my writing, sadly.

posted August 20, 2015 01:24 AM            

I got give of cups beauty found and lost, I feel the universe is saying nothing is wrong with your story you are just disappointed with it.

I asked how you can improve your story and got
Five of staves which shows me you are struggling with your story. Mayb struggling with ideas and struggling on making it work
The world rx - I feel the universe is saying what you said through the cards. To dumb down your writing because not a lot of ppl are as complex as you are they like it simple. not thAt this is your fault really, it's just ppl like things simple because most ppl don't have excellent attention spans.

posted August 20, 2015 01:38 AM            

What Covers You: The Empress

Something you are looking for is love and affection as noted, but also physical security. The theme of the next couple of months is going to be nurturing yourself and working on taking more time the things you enjoy. I also think this would a time of exploring creative outlets and volunteering.

What Crosses You: 7 of Swords

Are you trying to make changes in any area of your life? I see because The Empress came before it that you will be making positive changes that will only aid you from a physical and financial standpoint, as well as feel appreciated. If you have held back from making any changes in your life, now is the time to do it because the cards are in your favor.

What is Beneath You: 2 of Pentacles

The source of your tension or frustration is most likely linked to the choices you have in front of you. I foresee that you are learning to strike a balance in all areas of your life, and this struggle perhaps has made things a little challenging. During these months you will have to work hard to keep everything in check and not fall behind in any areas of life.

What is Behind You: 10 of Swords

Have you had a difficult time lately? A 10 of Swords is a tough card to pull in this position, which makes me think you were going through a recent period of defeat, which might be related to communication somehow. Whatever has gone on in your life that has caused difficulties, know that now you have reached the zenith and things will come to pass.

What Crowns You: 9 of Swords

A lot of inner tension I see, which is probably compounded by the issues related to the 10 of Swords. Has communication with someone or something caused you pain? I feel you have really think out all of the decisions you make during this period and not let anyone else influence you. What is needed during these months is a new perspective and allow yourself to make changes to overcome problems.

What is Before You: 3 of Cups

So yeah, not so great times are probably happening now, and if not, then in the very future. But, this is a great card to pull, because one things start turning around, you will achieve a much higher level of happiness. Expect to enjoy some fun parties, socialize and make new friends, and also implies on a romantic level that you might meet someone while hanging out in a group.

Your Self: Knight of Wands

The message these months are to act like the Knight of Wands- be bold and willing to take risks. The more you put yourself out there, the more likely you are to receive rewards and make your goals happen. From a romantic standpoint, do not be surprised if you end up having to the pursuer in a future relationship. Also watch out for being too impulsive and brash.

Around You: 8 of Wands

Boom- love. I am 100% convinced with the Knight of Wands above that you will hit it off with someone immediately and start dating. However, there will be a very strong sexual attraction, so you will have to make sure the both of you are on the same page and ensure that no feelings are hurt.

Hopes and Fears: 8 of Swords

Definitely some doubt on your end, and perhaps a little afraid to verbalize your thoughts or reach out to someone? If this is romantic related, then I see you might have some doubts and not put yourself out there as much as you should. Just remember that when stressful situations arrive to not give up, for again the worst is already passed or will pass.

Outcome: Ace of Wands

posted August 20, 2015 01:42 AM            

I'm not disappointed with the story, I personally love it. I hate the lack of respect I am being shown and want to quit writing because it sucks to see terrible stories praised while I work my butt off for nothing.

posted August 20, 2015 01:52 AM            

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Originally posted by BellaFenice:
Thanks Lexus!

I'm not disappointed with the story, I personally love it. I hate the lack of respect I am being shown and want to quit writing because it sucks to see terrible stories praised while I work my butt off for nothing.

I'm kind of confused by your answer though: are you saying I should dumb down my writing?

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I feel like that's what the five of cups is trying to say that you are feeling loss and disappointment because ppl are not liking it.

posted August 20, 2015 02:13 AM            

But here are the cards though.. Also I think you have some type of fear in there too

posted August 20, 2015 10:55 AM            

I will answer your above q when i come home this eve.

Thanks!

posted August 20, 2015 03:26 PM            

Just to double check - is it the same question?

I sent an email to someone yesterday and they replied today. I then replied to him lol. Am i going to get a positive response?

Thanks

posted August 20, 2015 04:28 PM            

3S KD JH 4H 8H

I think you have been feeling anxious and indecisive in the recent past due to KoD type character. I think there is someone around you know who is an admirer(orcares about you alot) and I think this could be the KoD character. In the near future you will be feeling more emotionally secure and with 8H as outcome you may receive an invitation to go out. Alternatively with the 8H you might feel emotionally detached about something. But with 4H I think it's the earlier.

I pulled some clarifiers to help me with I said and got

9C 2S JD
9C shows a change in the way of communicating and with 2S can show a division or a decision you will make, i think this is involving a JD character.

So I think from the above your love life is going to get better I think you are going to be coming to a decision regarding a diamonds type character(fair haired man or earth in this chart - or tradtional/hard working man), I think a decision also relates to the way you have been communicating with each other, and 9 can show the approaching end of a cycle. 4H tells me you will be feeling more secure emotionally and in love and with 8H as outcome I think you maybe socializing a bit more too.

Let me know what you think and how it goes. I can be wrong of course. Feedback helps with card interpretation.

posted August 20, 2015 10:34 PM            

8 of swords shows me you are worried about said response or how the person will react to your email. You feel maybe you overstepped your bounds or are anxious because you can't see how he's feeling or thinking.

Next is the hermit he says wait patiently. The hermit says you might be waiting for a while because he's slow to respond or he will respond quick and it feels like it was slow because your anxious for this reply?

Ace of wands says his response will be positive in your email and quick . It might even have a sexual ennuedo attached to it. he will contact you quickly. Ace of wands is a card of swift action.

posted August 21, 2015 02:31 AM            

**edited**

Thanks LV