Posts: 714
From: USA
Registered: Nov 2001

posted August 13, 2002 09:55 PM         

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Hi-
I appreciate the positive comments I've received here, so here are a few more poems...I'm open to constructive criticism too...
Breathing Light
07/30/02
(dedicated to my gemini)

I really miss him
the spark's gone dull
He brings the light
and fun to here

I imagined the loss
would not matter this much
But it hits so hard
the fire's just coals

I don't think I feel a crursh
those days have passed
But attention and spontenaity
matter in friends

He genuinely cares
or gives that impression
On the moments when
it matters most

I can't put to words
how he brightens my day
Without him and his brother
life slows to a crawl

The imersion of water
and fire gets old
I pine for the air
and desire the smile

08/07/02

A musical soundtrack
plays in my concious
enlivened enlightened
higher s-Elf

Pondering if lies
or mere frightened omission
Affects a realtion
of unspoken basis

Should honesty win?
when the receiver of news
will probably tell
the subject in question?

I feel I was right
in the straight-faced "no"
If it's meant to be
He won't lose hope

And he of all people
can read my soul better
Feel the depth of my core...

Our fascination
is endlessly strong
To pull us through
he will just read my mind

08/09/02

I long for him
my Twin Soul
But if we've met
I've yet to know

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-K
"Most people love with restraint
As if they were someday to hate
We hated gently, carefully
As if we were someday to love"-Venus Trines at Midnight

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From: Columbus, GA USA
Registered: Nov 2000

posted August 14, 2002 01:38 AM         

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"Should honesty win?"
*sigh*

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"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark

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From: California, USA
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posted August 14, 2002 11:21 AM         

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Post more poetry,Virgo-AriesArtist!Other people should,too.

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From: canada
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posted August 27, 2002 08:06 PM         

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I like, I like!!!
I love you'r style Virgo

KEEP IT UP PEACE & LOVE TO YOU

peace_keeper

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posted August 27, 2002 10:13 PM         

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No act of kindness, no matter how small, is ever wasted. -Aesop-

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From: Philipsburg,Montana-USA
Registered: Aug 2002

posted August 30, 2002 09:37 PM         

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Good evening to every one:
Virgo-Aries Artist, awsome thoughts, poetry in motion. My eldest son is a Gemini, my husband, that I was married to for 17 years, is a Gemini, one of my brothers, my second grandaughter, and 5 females 5 males, pure black, German Shepherd pups, all Gemini's. I love them. If you have known and loved, the Twins, you will know, what I mean. Linda say's it best, Don't tread on them with hob-nailed boots, one of the Twins will take over, they compensate each other. When Mecury takes them in flight, tears will never fill, the chasams left at night. They are a gift for us, one of compassion and love.
One of my friends is a Taurus, she has a Gemini son, and 2 Gemini daughters, what a awsome blend for all of them. She is Mother Earth with Air all around her. Yet, she doesn't have a man in her life, at home???
So... enough of the rambling, please, more poetry...it sooths the Soul.
Peace to your Soul Love to your Heart
Montana Rain

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posted November 03, 2002 10:03 PM         

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"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark

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From: El Lay, the Reel World
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posted November 30, 2002 10:37 AM         

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posted March 08, 2003 12:46 AM         

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bringing to top...

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