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Topic: Questions
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ROYA Knowflake Posts: 84 From: Norway Registered: Oct 2001
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posted September 01, 2003 04:56 PM
*QUESTIONS* In a dream it would seem I went to those who close the open door And turning the key,I sat and spoke to those inside of me They answered my questions with questions And they pointed me into the night Where the moon was a star-painted dancer And the world was just a spectrum of light They reached to my centre of reason And pulled on the touchstone that`s there The shock of that light had me reeling And I fell into the depths of despair Turning the key,I sat and spoke to those inside of me They answered my questions with questions And they send me to stand on the brink Where the sun and the moon where as brothers And all there was left was to think They answered my questions with questions And pointed me into the night And the power that bore me had left me alone -Slade/Mann. LOVE ROYA
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Virgo-AriesArtist Moderator Posts: 714 From: USA Registered: Nov 2001
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posted September 01, 2003 08:46 PM
Hey, Roya...I love your imagery...so mystical and rhythmic, yet ambiguously stirring. A well written verse. Big ! ------------------ -K "Most people love with restraint As if they were someday to hate We hated gently, carefully As if we were someday to love"-Venus Trines at Midnight IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 16464 From: Columbus, GA USA Registered: Nov 2000
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posted September 02, 2003 01:47 PM
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Pink Angel Knowflake Posts: 201 From: India Registered: Jul 2003
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posted September 06, 2003 02:48 PM
That was amazing! *claps and whistles!*IP: Logged |
SunShyne Moderator Posts: 449 From: Registered: May 2003
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posted September 06, 2003 02:53 PM
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