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posted September 29, 2003 06:30 PM         

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Spare me lies
r.dafremen

Spare me
The shame of knowing
my estimation of you was wrong
That all of the memories we shared
were wasting space there all along
inside my brain
Should I refrain
while you look me in the eye
and tell me
that you ain't done nothin' wrong?

I listened
at the door of the hotel room
where I thought I saw your car
Heard the sounds you'd made for me
mixed with another's groan
I felt the pain just then
For one moment
burning-stung, then gone
faded away
Things aren't the same
since it seared like steam
released from cabbage leaves
in the eggrolls in my car
See I was headed home
Thought I'd find you here alone
You're just arriving though
The food once hot for you
grown cold
Go ahead tell me again
how you ain't done nothin' wrong?

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posted September 30, 2003 01:36 PM         

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"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark

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posted September 30, 2003 07:57 PM         

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dafremen-I appreciate your poem.

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Get some Love in your groove, just get hip to Forgive...- Michael Franks

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posted September 30, 2003 10:59 PM         

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Thanks folks. By the way, that has never happened to me, just so you know. It was just a song that popped out of my head. It's a country song (course that's almost obvious huh?) I'm glad you guys enjoyed it!

Did anyone read Pergamino Number One? That's been helping me believe in my ability to succeed. I read it three times a day, just like it said. I've been doing it for 8 days and it's already getting easier to get into the habit. (That's what the first lecture is for...getting in the habit of a daily schedule for programming yourself for good habits.) At the end of the 30 days, if you folks would like a progress report, I'll be happy to give you one. I will translate each lecture as I come to it. If you feel like joining me, go right ahead..keep it to yourself it that makes you more comfortable, but if you need confidence, if you need to believe in yourself more, there it is.

Luv,

Daf

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posted October 01, 2003 03:42 PM         

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Wow, move over Hank & the boys, Daf`s "Moving it on Over"

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posted October 02, 2003 02:33 PM         

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I like this one. It's interesting how the genders of the people of this poem could either be woman or man.

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posted July 21, 2004 12:12 PM         

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To the top!

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posted July 21, 2004 01:06 PM         

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Thanks for bringing this to the top! I miss some great ones if I don't wander beyond today and yesterday!

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