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Topic: Stymiastaccato (a creepy poem I wrote for Halloween)
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Spiritua
Knowflake Posts: 1474
From: Toronto
Registered: Dec 2001
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posted November 01, 2003 10:15 PM
 
stymiastaccato
The world turned inside out. I stepped out of a psychotic elevator
which careened up, down, left, right and did loop-the-loops
on the way to the fifth floor of an abandoned mansion
which was a gateway to the Reptoid lair. It felt like a volcano.
People screamed and I didn’t know why. I could see windows
opening like doors to nothing but a turgid three-dimensional snapshot of
a three-headed chimera (which turned upsi
de-down and spun around then turned into a kaledioscopic psychedelia of
mush.)
I had to escape. Losing sanity was not worth the price of learning the secrets of the
Universe.
I ran back to the elevator again, which took me on a careening
roller-coaster ride
to the staircase of gaudy orange and yellow.
I got off the elevator. The stairs rumbled
as I ran
from an alternate dimension that I could hardly understand.
The front door got larger and larger towering over me the closer I got, but
when I reached it
it had become so small
that I had to crawl-IP: Logged |
moondreamer
Knowflake Posts: 260
From: durban
Registered: Nov 2002
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posted November 02, 2003 12:40 PM
WhoaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaWhat a roller coaster ride that poem was.
Thanx for sharing it with us.
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Randall
Webmaster Posts: 16464
From: Columbus, GA USA
Registered: Nov 2000
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posted November 04, 2003 02:14 PM
That creeped me out.  ------------------
"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark IP: Logged |
Aphrodite
Moderator Posts: 3280
From: San Francisco, CA, United States
Registered: Feb 2002
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posted November 05, 2003 12:47 PM
Hi Spiritua,I thought your poem was supercool  Love it! Thanks for sharing!!!  Aphrodite IP: Logged |
Randall
Webmaster Posts: 16464
From: Columbus, GA USA
Registered: Nov 2000
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posted November 05, 2003 08:33 PM
Oops, I meant creeped out in a good way.  Happy Halloween!------------------
"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark IP: Logged |
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