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posted December 03, 2003 09:28 AM         

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11/18/03

What the heck is wrong with me?
I am a finicky passionate being
No one takes my deep-seeded, widely varied interests
as seriously as I know they run

I wish to splatter the spinning wisdom
that coasters fixatedly through my mental chasms
But caring too much about how my future pans out
makes me sound whiney...yet following my heart's quite hard

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"Most people love with restraint
As if they were someday to hate
We hated gently, carefully
As if we were someday to love"-Venus Trines at Midnight

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posted December 03, 2003 11:11 PM         

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Your poems always touch me.

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"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark

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posted December 06, 2003 12:42 PM         

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Which word combo is this title?

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"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark

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posted December 06, 2003 10:47 PM         

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Randall...
The title comes from "energy" and "flaw"
thanks for asking

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"Most people love with restraint
As if they were someday to hate
We hated gently, carefully
As if we were someday to love"-Venus Trines at Midnight

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posted December 06, 2003 11:14 PM         

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So often when I read your works, I feel the energy, but can't find the flaws. It's as though when you channel it, you do so with (here's an oxymoron) precise feeling.

Do you ever feel like that?

daf

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posted December 07, 2003 12:28 AM         

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I knew the energy part. I'm getting better.

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posted December 07, 2003 10:20 PM         

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Hmmm..what do you mean daf, about me channeling the energy with "precise feeling"? I've been told by a friend what the energy I projected was very pure and honest, but beyond that, I'm not sure. I do find my mind is at it's clearest when I am pouring it's energy into verse.
The sort of "flaw" I was referring to, in this poem at least, was the brillant wisdom I feel at some moments, in so many different directions, twisting me as I attempt to decide on a path career-wise... my passion is split too much, so I devote not enough time to any one thing to know if I'd be good at it to pursue more seriously, if you get my drift. It's maddening.
Randall, glad to know you're improving on the title guessing. You've been a great moderator and support always. Thank you for providing us Knowflakes a warm and loving site to connect in.

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"Most people love with restraint
As if they were someday to hate
We hated gently, carefully
As if we were someday to love"-Venus Trines at Midnight

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posted January 15, 2004 01:26 PM         

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to the top...

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"Most people love with restraint
As if they were someday to hate
We hated gently, carefully
As if we were someday to love"-Venus Trines at Midnight

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