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Topic: Again, I accept.
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pixelpixie Moderator Posts: 6229 From: Ontario, Canada Registered: Aug 2003
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posted May 25, 2004 02:22 AM
Spin me another tale wrap me in your leaves brush me with your tender breath I love the webs you weave. Surrender seems a longing now a painful tightening grasp but pinched with red and pink and white this soulful frightening task. I tasted you so briefly, but remembered tongues are sweet. I only think about you now when I am longing for a treat. But what is it that makes me stall? This torturous human waterfall Emotions, only physical? Reactions, purely typical? But you are, underneath it all so wanted and still........my heart calls only sometimes It's dormant after sunrise You're the realest illusion I could conjure. But if I could really choose, if I could win this time, not lose... Of course, the fantasy adds fun I like that I'm the only one that can take you to the heights you've missed with imagined magic fingertips and lips that only felt heat once and nowhere near the place you'd wished I accept renewed surprise I accept your lullabyes I accept the roles we've chosen, tales unwrapped, our words beholden I accept that sometimes lies are all that's left when something dies I accept that love's receipt is mostly truth but in deceipt So this eve as I lay me down or prop up the pillow no sleep to be found I will once again conjure you Your image again trying not to intrude I will purge your face this I accept I will kiss you deeply 'til I am out of breath And maybe then you will go on your way And try not to wonder how it would feel today until the next night comes again I hope you are sleeping well, my friend.
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pixelpixie Moderator Posts: 6229 From: Ontario, Canada Registered: Aug 2003
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posted May 27, 2004 03:23 PM
I feel like I got buried under the rest. So I say; TO THE TOP *sigh* Leo ascendant avenged.* IP: Logged |
purplezen Knowflake Posts: 888 From: outer space Registered: Aug 2003
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posted May 27, 2004 07:43 PM
wow, pixel! I adore your poetry. IP: Logged |
Yin Knowflake Posts: 898 From: Registered: May 2004
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posted May 28, 2004 09:47 AM
It seems to me that you have found a way to channel your Scorpio self through your fire asc. Throw in a Merc. in Libra and there you have a Pixelpixie. And... I love that about you. You poetry is inspiring. ------------------ "Know thyself" Inscribed on the temple of Apollo at Delphi IP: Logged |
TINK Knowflake Posts: 1359 From: New England Registered: Mar 2003
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posted May 28, 2004 10:49 AM
Yin is right, pixel. You're Scorpio comes out in your song. I read an awful lot of poetry and your rhythm reminds me of someone but I can't think who. It's on the tip of my tongue. It'll come to me eventually. In the mean time, just wanted to say that this one and "so" are really quite something. Thank you for sharing with us. IP: Logged |
pixelpixie Moderator Posts: 6229 From: Ontario, Canada Registered: Aug 2003
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posted May 28, 2004 02:43 PM
Oh gosh! *gush* Thanks.. that was very nice to read. I like the description of Yin's.. very nice! You know, one doesn't have much opportunity to share songs/poetry in regular life, so to share such potent things for our hearts and spirits is like stretching out on a cliff... I am glad this forum exists and all the positive feedback. It's nice not to fall... and to read and feel everyone else's spirits too.IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 20431 From: Columbus, GA USA Registered: Nov 2000
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posted May 29, 2004 08:42 AM
------------------ "Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark IP: Logged |
The passenger Knowflake Posts: 370 From: Taipei, Taiwan Registered: Jan 2004
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posted May 29, 2004 03:17 PM
Powerful and well-written...I'd like to write more rhyme poems myself as well. I would say this piece of work is quite amazing ------------------ Dana IP: Logged |
Charlotte Knowflake Posts: 270 From: Tn. USA Registered: Apr 2004
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posted June 13, 2004 12:24 PM
You continue to astound me! What talent...I've loved everything that I've read so far. IP: Logged |
TINK Knowflake Posts: 1359 From: New England Registered: Mar 2003
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posted June 13, 2004 08:39 PM
Yup, that pixie is pretty nifty.IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 20431 From: Columbus, GA USA Registered: Nov 2000
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posted July 08, 2004 01:13 PM
*bump*------------------ "Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark IP: Logged |
pixelpixie Moderator Posts: 6229 From: Ontario, Canada Registered: Aug 2003
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posted July 08, 2004 07:29 PM
Thanks for *bump*-ing me, Randall, that was nice! IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 20431 From: Columbus, GA USA Registered: Nov 2000
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posted July 08, 2004 10:41 PM
------------------ "Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark IP: Logged |
26taurus Moderator Posts: 5052 From: the stars Registered: Jun 2004
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posted July 18, 2004 02:16 AM
W W What talent Pixel!IP: Logged |
Sheaa Olein Moderator Posts: 1983 From: Blighty Registered: Jul 2004
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posted July 21, 2004 07:59 AM
Oh musical mind, you're so blessed *adoring look & sigh* S ------------------ Sheaa Olein, previously Known as the Knowflake 'Special' IP: Logged |
greycat Knowflake Posts: 34 From: Australia Registered: Sep 2004
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posted January 31, 2005 07:07 AM
i really like this one
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future_uncertain Knowflake Posts: 446 From: ohio Registered: Aug 2004
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posted January 31, 2005 09:22 AM
Pixie... I really love this one! It could be my favorite of all the Pixie stuff I've read so far. Love the rhythm, especially this part: quote: my heart calls only sometimes It's dormant after sunrise You're the realest illusion I could conjure. But if I could really choose, if I could win this time, not lose...
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