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Topic: LL Improv #3 (Bind that Ties)
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dafremen
Knowflake Posts: 779
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Registered: Nov 2002
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posted June 15, 2004 10:16 PM
 
My soul is diminished
With each moment of your dissatisfaction
Within the bounds of a common yearning
Only these are the marks of our humanity:
Patience, humility, nobility and courage
Suffering, generosity, empathy and grace
Yet all of these are nothing for lack of love
It is love which binds them together
Love which binds the Sculptor to His works
A love dedicated to you
For you
For us all...daf
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The passenger
Knowflake Posts: 320
From: Taipei, Taiwan
Registered: Jan 2004
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posted June 16, 2004 11:33 AM
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quiksilver
Knowflake Posts: 149
From: new jersey, usa
Registered: Nov 2001
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posted June 16, 2004 11:32 PM
Was wondering if you felt like sharing who was dissatisfied by you in your poem?? Or is it too personal? Just curious..IP: Logged |
dafremen
Knowflake Posts: 779
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Registered: Nov 2002
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posted June 17, 2004 07:12 PM
They weren't necessarily dissatified with me. But whatever it is in life that leaves them feeling less than satisfied with their lot causes me pain.love, daf IP: Logged |
juniperb
Moderator Posts: 4853
From: www.Heaven.Home
Registered: Mar 2002
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posted June 20, 2004 08:58 AM
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Charlotte
Knowflake Posts: 28
From: Murfreesboro,Tn. USA
Registered: Apr 2004
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posted June 20, 2004 05:09 PM
Beautiful... Your soul shines through in your writing! Peace, Charlotte
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26taurus
Knowflake Posts: 118
From: somewhere in the Green Mountains, VT
Registered: Jun 2004
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posted June 20, 2004 05:16 PM
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