Posts: 1847
From: Ontario Canada
Registered: Jun 2005

posted July 21, 2004 12:22 AM         

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His well-muscled forearm
threw a wrench into my plans
maybe he slid it into them...
Well oiled, it fit right where it was needed.
Tools of the trade.
But if my plans were really so solid,
would it have made entrance?
Would it have entered my mind...
Clanking and reverberating around this room, it echoes still...
where it fell, etched into my memories.
Shadowed on the wall
The wrench, wrenching my gut.
Forcing me to realize painful things
But also joyful and intense.
Or why would I feel the need to visit so often?
These pooled illusions.
This engine purrs.......
I am so real with this unreality
His eyes are so real
so vivid they scratch my skin
He sees where I let him in
And I am afraid
I will let him in

His Monkey crawling on my back
Forcing me to see just what I lack.

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Posts: 2462
From: Outskirts of London
Registered: Jul 2004

posted July 21, 2004 07:53 AM         

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Pixie, that's amazing. Did you write it? It's one of those pieces that's magically adaptable, like Gooberz.

I hardly come here, but should, got quite alot building up I should post.

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Posts: 1847
From: Ontario Canada
Registered: Jun 2005

posted July 21, 2004 09:56 AM         

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Yeah, I wrote it last night, as I posted it. That's usually how I write my poems.. I go "I am inspired!" And then I write.

Don't ask my motivation........
It could be someone elses' story, a movie, my personal thoughts... If I feel it, I write it.

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Registered: May 2004

posted July 21, 2004 12:22 PM         

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I meant to tell you Pixie, that my favorite poet in Bulgaria is a Scorpio as well. So are my favorite writers. There is something about your intense Scorpion emotion that is very appealing to me.

Thank you for your beautiful poetry.

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Posts: 1847
From: Ontario Canada
Registered: Jun 2005

posted July 21, 2004 01:02 PM         

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Thank you for your beautiful words!!!
Each time you post to me on this forum, you make me smile!

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From: Columbus, GA USA
Registered: Nov 2000

posted July 26, 2004 01:14 PM         

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"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark

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