Posts: 231
From: uk
Registered: Oct 2004

posted December 16, 2004 11:33 AM         

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ummmm, why oh why
oh why
my soul stirs
its insatiable
be it ecstacy, tradegy,
tragic
yearning to belong, be longed,
be one
union of body
your body, my body
our bodies entwined
every movement throws me
i'm in throes
sheer passion
like beasts we devour
each other
all senses awakened,
heightened
we go higher and higher,
higher still
writhing
in rhythm,
our rhythm
immersed in essence
ummm, the smell
your smell,
your taste,
hungry
im hungry,
hungry for love

this is a poem i wrote to my ex....we both shared a passion for the simple pleasures of life....food and love

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posted December 16, 2004 01:12 PM         

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Wow, that was beautiful, Moonbaby!!

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From: uk
Registered: Oct 2004

posted December 16, 2004 01:57 PM         

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thanks a lot yin

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posted December 17, 2004 01:38 AM         

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Very beautiful indeed.

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Registered: Aug 2003

posted December 17, 2004 02:50 AM         

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oooh. I am a big fan of simple structure and things like this~

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yearning to belong, be longed,

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I love saying the same thing, essentially.. but meaning a whole other.
Love it!

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From: uk
Registered: Oct 2004

posted December 18, 2004 04:14 AM         

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wow, thanks again 26, thank you pix. i definitely enjoyed writting this one....

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