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Topic: The Trial
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ghanima81 Knowflake Posts: 649 From: MAINE! :) Registered: Aug 2003
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posted January 07, 2005 12:10 PM
This just came to me thinking about a past love... kinda applies to another situation too...----------------------------------------- Every mirror has two faces Every trial has two cases Two runners competing on a track both run two different races But when it comes to matters of the heart A jurys verdict need not apply for every crime committed is the fault of you or I You may see it your way and I will see it mine So why can't we come clean? Is it ego, is it pride? What wounds you've caused I'm saying now I'd like you to admit to Listen up, I'll say I'm sorry for what I did to you I've heard it whispered through the air What you've been telling them They're getting only one side though, your who, your what, your when So strange to think that what we had We'll never have again And now it seems, the jurys out on us even being friends Ghani ---------------------------------------- IP: Logged |
26taurus Moderator Posts: 4152 From: the stars Registered: Jun 2004
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posted January 07, 2005 04:11 PM
Loved this poem. quote: I've heard it whispered through the air What you've been telling them They're getting only one side though, your who, your what, your when
Always two sides to a story, arent there?
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LeoSweetHeart Knowflake Posts: 167 From: San Diego, CA USA Registered: Nov 2004
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posted January 07, 2005 04:19 PM
I loved this poem too. It felt like it was speaking to me because I going through something with my boyfriend that it seems you were going through with yours. haha I just read UN and saw that one spoke to 26, see you've already helped two people with your beautiful poetry. Keep posting we love it IP: Logged |
ghanima81 Knowflake Posts: 649 From: MAINE! :) Registered: Aug 2003
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posted January 07, 2005 11:15 PM
Thanks very much, both of you!!This came out yesterday... I had this whole vision of a courtroom and a ''he said, she said'' kind of trial... I'm sure we've all been there and had fallouts with people in our lives over it. 26, Yes, there most certainly are... I ask to be forgiven by all whose story I did not hear before making judgements, I am truly a fool for not listening... or asking the right questions... Ghani IP: Logged |
26taurus Moderator Posts: 4152 From: the stars Registered: Jun 2004
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posted January 08, 2005 01:36 AM
Youre far from a fool, love. 26 IP: Logged |
Dynamic_Stillness Knowflake Posts: 51 From: London Registered: Dec 2004
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posted January 08, 2005 01:36 PM
My Dear Ghanima81...Wow just simply Wow! It's becoming harder to find words to express just how good your writing is. This has to be my favourite! Akash. IP: Logged |