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ghanima81
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From: MAINE! :)
Registered: Aug 2003

posted January 07, 2005 12:10 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for ghanima81     Edit/Delete Message
This just came to me thinking about a past love... kinda applies to another situation too...

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Every mirror has two faces
Every trial has two cases
Two runners competing on a track
both run two different races

But when it comes to matters of the heart
A jurys verdict need not apply
for every crime committed
is the fault of you or I

You may see it your way
and I will see it mine
So why can't we come clean?
Is it ego, is it pride?

What wounds you've caused
I'm saying now
I'd like you to admit to
Listen up,
I'll say I'm sorry
for what I did to you

I've heard it whispered through the air
What you've been telling them
They're getting only one side though,
your who, your what, your when

So strange to think that what we had
We'll never have again
And now it seems, the jurys out
on us even being friends

Ghani

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26taurus
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Posts: 4152
From: the stars
Registered: Jun 2004

posted January 07, 2005 04:11 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for 26taurus     Edit/Delete Message
Loved this poem.

quote:
I've heard it whispered through the air
What you've been telling them
They're getting only one side though,
your who, your what, your when

Always two sides to a story, arent there?

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LeoSweetHeart
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Posts: 167
From: San Diego, CA USA
Registered: Nov 2004

posted January 07, 2005 04:19 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for LeoSweetHeart     Edit/Delete Message
I loved this poem too.

It felt like it was speaking to me because I going through something with my boyfriend that it seems you were going through with yours.

haha I just read UN and saw that one spoke to 26, see you've already helped two people with your beautiful poetry. Keep posting we love it

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ghanima81
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Posts: 649
From: MAINE! :)
Registered: Aug 2003

posted January 07, 2005 11:15 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for ghanima81     Edit/Delete Message
Thanks very much, both of you!!

This came out yesterday... I had this whole vision of a courtroom and a ''he said, she said'' kind of trial... I'm sure we've all been there and had fallouts with people in our lives over it.

26,

Yes, there most certainly are...
I ask to be forgiven by all whose story I did not hear before making judgements, I am truly a fool for not listening... or asking the right questions...

Ghani

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26taurus
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From: the stars
Registered: Jun 2004

posted January 08, 2005 01:36 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for 26taurus     Edit/Delete Message

Youre far from a fool, love.


26

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Dynamic_Stillness
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Posts: 51
From: London
Registered: Dec 2004

posted January 08, 2005 01:36 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Dynamic_Stillness     Edit/Delete Message
My Dear Ghanima81...

Wow just simply Wow!

It's becoming harder to find words to express just how good your writing is.

This has to be my favourite!
Akash.

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