Posts: 6168
From: Ontario, Canada
Registered: Aug 2003

posted January 26, 2005 03:57 PM         

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I was envisioning a painting. I put words to it because the paint won't do.

If I could visualize a radiant being
with spools of never ending threads, glowing where they connect
to the source
I would be that conduit,
the tentacles I weave in and out of meetings
leaving whispering tendrils and whisps of light in their wake
the many layered sparks shoot out at times
to remind both seeker and bringer
some are dormant yet ready to surge with life.
others constant small currents of electricity
a remembered kiss
a touch
a brush of words on a lonely night
some are thick as snakes
alive and sparking, glowing with each meeting and still on, apart
some need nurturing, some only dreams
one is ever ready a steady supply of vision and love.
But the others remain, beacons to my spirit in shattered moments
I feed on them as they feed on me
A chain
I feel this.

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posted January 26, 2005 04:56 PM         

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Wow.

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posted January 26, 2005 05:23 PM         

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I see it!! It would be a lovely painting. You know Miss Pixie, the way you describe things, makes it so if I were blind or could not taste, or smell, or hear... I would still be able to appreciate things as they are to you... you have such a way with your words!!

the way you see the world!

Ghani

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posted January 26, 2005 06:01 PM         

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Wow, Pixie, sheer, wonderful fantasy. Where do you get your ideas from??!
How many poems do you write per week, on average? You are tremendous with words!

LOL
AriesTiger

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From: Ontario, Canada
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posted January 27, 2005 01:08 AM         

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Why thank you!
26 and Ghani, you are my champions, always prodding me on...
Ariestiger~ Thank you muchly!!!!
I appreciate your words.
I write too much. I think I don't always come out with the best stuff, simply because I am moved to write, so I will.. and there's no way awesomeness can come out every time. That's okay.
But then again, I can have dry periods, where I only write on this forum, not anything poetic.
I wrote another tonight ( Not Broken ) so obviously, having a wet spell ( as opposed to a dry spell.... .)

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