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Topic: not really a poem
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greycat
Knowflake Posts: 95
From: Australia
Registered: Sep 2004
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posted January 31, 2005 05:58 AM
 
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moonshine
Knowflake Posts: 320
From: UK
Registered: Oct 2004
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posted January 31, 2005 04:45 PM
Nice, greycat. Some vivid imagery there!  IP: Logged |
pixelpixie
Moderator Posts: 8030
From: Ontario, Canada
Registered: Aug 2003
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posted January 31, 2005 04:50 PM
oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh
I really liked that.IP: Logged |
ghanima81
Knowflake Posts: 1223
From: MAINE! :)
Registered: Aug 2003
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posted January 31, 2005 07:19 PM
MMMMMMMmmm.... Everything I have I would throw it in the river,
Just for your clothes on the floor… like before…
Like a dream with no reality, like a night with no light
Our story is with no last pages…
There is dust on my pawns,
I’m playing chess against the universe
And a hard question is hurting me
“The one that loves more, is he always losing or gaining?” That part really got to me... Nice, greycat!!  Ghani
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