Posts: 56
From: Australia
Registered: Sep 2004

posted February 19, 2005 05:26 AM         

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In a dark well known room
I was talking wilfully, long...
that everything's over,
that there's nothing left,
that us two weren't made for each other.
For the first time i was being honest,
with no single lie,
i was whispering, as quiet as i could
that next to her i was happy no more...
Then i looked at her,
silently biting my lips,
while the forgotten dreams were floating in the room,
I didn't know what else to say,
being helpless as a child.
She said - don't worry
She said - it doesn't matter
She said - it will burn out
She said - just give me a strong hug
She said - everything's alright
She said - hug me lustily
She said - I'm perfectly fine
not until she started crying...

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Posts: 31
From: Miami, FL, USA
Registered: Apr 2004

posted February 19, 2005 03:14 PM         

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That's pretty strong stuff there, greycat.
It coated my eyes with water and that's a quite a tough feat for a Gemini Moon in Virgo.

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Posts: 5979
From: the stars
Registered: Jun 2004

posted February 28, 2005 01:36 PM         

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From: ohio
Registered: Aug 2004

posted February 28, 2005 11:12 PM         

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Ouch!

I love this part:

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while the forgotten dreams were floating in the room

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What a perfect way to describe the moment you both know it's over.

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