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From: USA
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posted April 04, 2005 11:15 AM         

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04/04/05

Could I have been that young and naive?
Yes, I suppose that's not difficult to believe.
I hung alot of weight on my people-reading skill
Turns out I deluded myself with idealistic will
How evident should that fact have been,
For if I looked close enough, I should have seen a general trend

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From: white bear lake, MN, USA
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posted April 06, 2005 01:02 AM         

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I really like that. I like poems that are short and sweet, but hold such impact

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From: USA
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posted April 06, 2005 08:42 AM         

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Thanks, glad you liked it, missapples it's nice to hear...

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