Posts: 1164
From: MAINE! :)
Registered: Aug 2003

posted April 13, 2005 02:27 PM         

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I've been really busy lately, wrote this a few weeks ago... turns out to be a bit of truth in it...

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My Uranian mind
travels 29 degrees south
to worry
and flashing red lights
blinking a laser show into
my blue print
to insecurity
learning lessons from Pluto
thwarted in purpose
by the moons tiger growl
to security
remembering wrongly
Cancers insufferable grasp
and Virgo's innocent, patient gaze
the arrows aimed directly
at the sea beast's heart
I buried all the feelings
of the scolding hot water
the matching scortch marks
making a mockery of pain
empty Uranus
serving as a mirror
cold as glass
reflecting humanity
upon humanity
the scales tipping
tripping from the classroom
to the lecture hall
will Venus loosen her grasp
and let it all be buried
planted as a dream
into the clouds
brown clumps of earth
damp
warm
and breathing
a seedling
trying to reach the Sun

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Posts: 7693
From: Ontario, Canada
Registered: Aug 2003

posted April 13, 2005 04:50 PM         

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...d--d--b--b-b-bb

Woman, you are the essence of female. Your natural ability to emote, and do so with such intensity and splintering, heart-tearing honesty humbles me to the point of deathly silence...

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Yeah... um.. ditto
wow thanks and that goes doubly, you wonderful you, you!
I always feel your poems. Always.
MAH-VE-LOUS!!!!

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