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Topic: Swimming (this one's short)
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future_uncertain
Knowflake Posts: 3226
From: ohio
Registered: Aug 2004
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posted September 14, 2005 09:48 PM
 
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whiterabbit
Knowflake Posts: 1236
From: the other side
Registered: Aug 2004
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posted September 14, 2005 10:55 PM
the ending "makes it".
And it is happy!IP: Logged |
pixelpixie
Knowflake Posts: 5492
From: Ontario Canada
Registered: Jun 2005
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posted September 14, 2005 11:43 PM
It is a happy poem!
f*cking oars.
Go flail around in the deep!IP: Logged |
Randall
Webmaster Posts: 27305
From: Columbus, GA USA
Registered: Nov 2000
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posted September 15, 2005 08:32 AM
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"There is no use trying," said Alice; "one can't believe impossible things." "I dare say you haven't had much practice," said the Queen. "When I was your age, I always did it for half an hour a day. Why, sometimes I've believed as many as six impossible things before breakfast." Lewis Carroll IP: Logged |
Bluemoon
Knowflake Posts: 4484
From: Stafford, VA USA
Registered: Feb 2005
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posted September 15, 2005 08:59 AM
It reads like a song, Future. Very Lyrical!  IP: Logged |
Lindaland
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