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AcousticGod Knowflake Posts: 5118 From: Pleasanton, CA Registered: Apr 2009
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posted September 17, 2005 01:05 AM
Sit down for awhile let's talk Tell me everything you ever thought Tell me about faeries dancing Tell me of childhood loves Tell me a story you made up Let's lay back turn our eyes to the sky Watch the shifting shapes pass by Something you were about to say Almost made me cry Not quite "almost" If you could feel the way this heart beats so mercilessly so determined What can I channel this into? Was this heart designed for one or two? One or two A couple, a few A restlessness A desire to explode Love is a burden(Written while listening to Magic Hours by Explosions In The Sky) IP: Logged |
AcousticGod Knowflake Posts: 5118 From: Pleasanton, CA Registered: Apr 2009
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posted September 17, 2005 01:12 AM
Sitting on the floor Playing with kid's toys So much wonder in this dark room The color muted in the light of the moon A neighbor boy beats his drums An electric guitar clumsy and distorted Loud and then stopped Serenity A baby cries Reminding me of new life I should go see I'll rock the baby Pass my peace to him It's exciting to think of what these eyes will see What these eyes will see(Written while listening to Yasmin the Light by the same band) IP: Logged |
AcousticGod Knowflake Posts: 5118 From: Pleasanton, CA Registered: Apr 2009
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posted September 17, 2005 01:18 AM
A hint of a feeling You want to intensify What is it? Is it peace? Is it a question? A simpler confusion A gentle washing Pass my soul through the charcoal Let me be pure What do trembling lips mean? My eyes want my face clean I can feel the beauty I can Is it over?(Yes, written to another instrumental song from the same band.) IP: Logged |
AcousticGod Knowflake Posts: 5118 From: Pleasanton, CA Registered: Apr 2009
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posted September 17, 2005 01:24 AM
I'm sad to send you away I'll miss your face I'll miss the way we are But it'll be great for you You have a world to explore Far from here Far from meWho knows who you might meet? Clever people They will really like you You've so much to give What a blessing You are Be yourself Let your light shine brightly Explore the culture Try not to drown in the ecstacy Your curious desires will be well sated Farewell my friend Don't forget IP: Logged |
AcousticGod Knowflake Posts: 5118 From: Pleasanton, CA Registered: Apr 2009
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posted September 17, 2005 01:33 AM
It's what you want to see A joyful moment, a memory? A fire lakeside Dancing Family The night air is so healthy Water, Earth, Fire and Air Enjoying one another Unspoken commitments A warm feeling inside The music of water lapping gently on the shore, Fire cackling burning the sand, Familiar voices It takes a quiet one to notice Dream of what tomorrow brings More fun, more sun, more water But tomorrow's tomorrow and tonight's tonight There's much to be thankful for tonightIP: Logged |
AcousticGod Knowflake Posts: 5118 From: Pleasanton, CA Registered: Apr 2009
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posted September 17, 2005 01:38 AM
What's that energy floating there? Drawing me in Capturing my attention What would you say to me if you could speak? Shine on Shine On Why? I will listen OKIP: Logged |
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posted September 17, 2005 01:40 AM
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AcousticGod Knowflake Posts: 5118 From: Pleasanton, CA Registered: Apr 2009
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posted September 17, 2005 01:46 AM
This song I'm listening to now had me in a trance. Was really ethereal. Is really ethereal.Up late? I'm not usually home on Friday nights. IP: Logged |
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posted September 17, 2005 01:51 AM
Took a nap..up now for a little bit. I rarely go out. Pretty peaceful life.IP: Logged |
AcousticGod Knowflake Posts: 5118 From: Pleasanton, CA Registered: Apr 2009
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posted September 17, 2005 01:56 AM
Oh cool. It's been really dead here at night lately, and it's generally slow during the weekend.Normally I'm out playing music Friday nights. I heard this band almost a month ago now, and just finally got hold of their music. It made me feel creative when I first heard it, so I thought I'd try writing to it. It's really nice. IP: Logged |
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posted September 17, 2005 02:32 AM
*sigh*Beautiful, Acoustic IP: Logged |
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posted September 17, 2005 02:34 AM
Shine on IP: Logged |
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posted September 17, 2005 03:36 AM
"shine on indeed"Beautiful musings !!!! You are a legend !!! xxx
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AcousticGod Knowflake Posts: 5118 From: Pleasanton, CA Registered: Apr 2009
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posted September 17, 2005 03:45 AM
Thanks Good morning!IP: Logged |
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posted September 17, 2005 07:27 AM
Lovely, thanks for sharing with us. :love;IP: Logged |
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posted September 17, 2005 12:55 PM
AG, Thanks for sharing that was awesome, your awesome.Love and Light IP: Logged |
future_uncertain Knowflake Posts: 196 From: Registered: May 2009
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posted September 17, 2005 03:01 PM
Stirring, Acoustic God. I feel your words. Love to you! IP: Logged |
pixelpixie Knowflake Posts: 42 From: ON Canada Registered: Apr 2009
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posted September 17, 2005 03:38 PM
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whiterabbit Newflake Posts: 0 From: Registered: Sep 2009
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posted September 17, 2005 03:59 PM
Those are beautiful, A.G. they feel like chapters of one poem. IP: Logged |
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posted September 19, 2005 02:52 AM
Really beautiful, AG.I especially like the fourth one. ------------------ What the caterpillar calls the end of the world the master calls a butterfly. ~Richard Bach IP: Logged |
AcousticGod Knowflake Posts: 5118 From: Pleasanton, CA Registered: Apr 2009
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posted September 19, 2005 12:00 PM
Thanks everyone for the kind comments. Will have to try that again sometime. It was amazing the way the emotions flooded out. Kinda scary. IP: Logged |
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posted October 02, 2005 06:42 PM
I write on www.poetry.com because when you write they already have your copyright on what you write. I wrote this on 1/23/2002: Spellbound in wonder love is transfigured Shining souls are one And unfold beyond the threshold of mortal flesh IP: Logged |
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posted October 02, 2005 06:45 PM
AG, If I should ever come to CA, I would like to meet you. It would be interesting and good to speak with you face-to-face. Singer2112IP: Logged |
AcousticGod Knowflake Posts: 5118 From: Pleasanton, CA Registered: Apr 2009
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posted October 02, 2005 08:15 PM
Nice. Writing doesn't need to be long to hold meaning and beauty.I take it as a compliment that you'd like to meet me face-to-face. AG IP: Logged |
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posted October 02, 2005 09:36 PM
AG, Thanks. I'll put more up later. Right now writing short poems and etc. seems to be the order of the month. I need to start writing songs again, longer stuff. Your images are wonderful. Have you done any recording? Silly question, but it seems to be my night for verbal fumbling. Singer2112 IP: Logged |