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MAGUS of MUSIC
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posted September 23, 2005 07:55 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for MAGUS of MUSIC     Edit/Delete Message
Atleast thats the working title of this albaum and story. Here is the two songs Im sure Ive lyricaly completed, and copyrited.

END WHATS BEGUN--

Tears falling faster then a Crowley students blood
Been welling up since before mortals creation from clay and mud.
Up creaps the darkness,my souls ever falling
Trumpets of ENKI's heaven sent forces sounding, against a lower orders march surmounting.

The world has been blackening us for far too long.

Make this stop
How to make it stop?
Must end this stinging
Repeated hells burning
We cant stop this ball
Always clashing from back to forth

-End whats begun-

Creating for ourselves an eternal sea of missery,,,
Welling up,
Gushing forth
From inside of you,
last against me.

The hand of turn is now back with me
Cant yet see strait
Pains anger still all that feels real
Within my eternal self

Dont want to hurt you
You still tempt me to strike
What would N did you do
If like that I still burned to sting
Always maming you [whisperd]

Just cant find what too do

-End whats begun-

Time to admit,
You arouse when the a$&Holes lineup
to s#!% on,
THEN IN YOU.

How much of their lowely breeds flagelence
will finnaly fill you ?!

HA HA HA HA HA
HO HO HO HO HO
HA HA HA HA HA

Was that all,,,
You realy
wanted me to do ?

Being caring is no longer fun.
My wrath long over due now
Forced upon me,,,
against you [whisperd]


Then we have a minuit instramental bridge that leads into the next chapter and movement -


-IT HAS BEGUN-
[part 1]

Did you realy think this Angel
Doesnt harbor a vengfull soul ?
One that surpasses your darkest secrets
Heavens foundations -
Once ROCKED,
SHAKEN,
ASUNDER TORN [screamed in death style vocals]

by this ancient lament.

Did you truly believe it was only
the offering of my light
that once called into darkness's depths ,,
for you [whisperd]

Foolish chiiiiiiillld,
the nawS only knew
how to hold back his leashed wrath
from you.

Little thing
I believe
you may have, wanted me
to engulf and burn you.

Heeeeeeyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
My fellow rebeleous stinging
Darling Jewel,
Does this not ring true ?

You and all the others [vocals agresion rising here]
Now all gone- Beyond far

Last strings of compasion,
Freindship,
Trust
BROKEN, RIPPED,
ASUNDER TORN [in loud death vocals]

[part 2]

You arent the only one
who can burn,scar,
treat another as nothing
I think youl find
make your self my threat
auther of my lifes havoc,
emotional scorn

Its my art [repeat 2 more times]
Just another game
Ill have ya taste
true emotional burn

NOW ITS MY TURN [3 voices chant, 1 female][repeat 5 times]

You will wish yourself
To not exist

How is it to be brought
Down below your knees
All breath,and inner life stolen

You entire existance
will walk in dark of doubt
DARK OF DOUBT [repeat 2 more times, in 3 voices]

-IT HAS BEGUN- [shouted ,3 voices]

[go back to softer sung ]

Is this what he wants?

NONE OF THIS
Was this even justice ?
Was this the only way
Can I go back
Fix whats begun ?
Can this be undone?
Bound by oath
NO TURNING BACK

Im sorry [whisperd softly]
-IT HAS BEGUN-
Sirius ,someone,
help her


there you have it, these two songs are part of one of the 3 symphonies in the albaum, roughly around the middle of the story.


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sue g
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posted September 24, 2005 03:56 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for sue g     Edit/Delete Message
WOW........you are a poet indeed.....this is very powerful stuff. and I can see it on the shelves "in your local record shop".........

and partly inspired by who.........I wonder........mmm......:bheart"

Well done, I am coming to know many great artists !!!!

xx

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lotusheartone
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posted September 24, 2005 06:15 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for lotusheartone     Edit/Delete Message
Magus,

That was astounding, you are so talented, I can't wait to hear it......

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Lialei
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posted September 26, 2005 09:24 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Lialei     Edit/Delete Message
Magus

Love that you entered the whispered and CAPITAL parts...can really get a sense of how it sounds...and hope to hear it one day.

Such a tenuous fragile line sometimes; this existance. Trust and Faith can take a lifetime to build, yet one intensly shattering experience to crumble down.

We all walk this line everyday.

Keep walking on, Rockin' Crusador .

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MAGUS of MUSIC
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posted September 26, 2005 01:07 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for MAGUS of MUSIC     Edit/Delete Message
Glad you all like it.

Inspired by a parralell My Arish freind !

lotus- may be a few years still till a cpmleted and masterd version is ready.

Lialei- So the whispers and capitalisations where enough to get the sound acrost ?....

And that is true,,sometimes it doesnt take long for everything you built your existance, and reality off of to just fall faster then even trade center towers .

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fayte.m
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posted September 28, 2005 09:22 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for fayte.m     Edit/Delete Message

Very evocative...interesting...yes....very....
HHhhmmmmmm....wonder if some part of you remembers what I seem to remember.....

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MAGUS of MUSIC
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posted September 30, 2005 02:20 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for MAGUS of MUSIC     Edit/Delete Message
Fayte,, concously all I know is there is something old in me too all of this... And I think this is the first life I didnt act upon my angers towards the one soul who inspired the temporary hell I walked through too write this,,, came realy close for a while there though...

As far as the enitre albaums story concept,, something old and paralell seems to be behind it indeed. I started comign up with the story plot atlesat by age 7,8 in my dreams and daydreamings at school as a child. Shortly after I first started reading and learning about WW2 in my schools propaganda filled and waterd down text book versions of the whole ordeal.

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