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Topic: PREDATOR
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RAINBOW WARRIOR
Knowflake Posts: 55
From: new zealand
Registered: Feb 2005
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posted November 23, 2005 04:34 PM
 
PREDATORShe is up ahead
on her new pink push bike.
But you who are you
reading glasses expensive suit.
Following close behind. She waves,i wave back too
but now i'm looking at you.
You did not know did you
i was here,i am your fear now.
Yeah thats right,look away
and dont you come back. ------------------
LOVE*PEACE&RESPECT IP: Logged |
lotusheartone
Knowflake Posts: 4557
From: piopolis, quebec canada
Registered: Jul 2005
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posted November 23, 2005 04:38 PM
Have no Fear
Almighty Isis is here... ...IP: Logged |
RAINBOW WARRIOR
Knowflake Posts: 55
From: new zealand
Registered: Feb 2005
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posted December 03, 2005 03:43 PM
Kiaora(to your well being)lotus heart.IP: Logged |
future_uncertain
Knowflake Posts: 2136
From: ohio
Registered: Aug 2004
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posted December 08, 2005 08:57 AM
In almost every one of your poems, something concrete stands out to me. In this one it's the pink pushbike. There is something I love about your writing. Keep it up!IP: Logged |
RAINBOW WARRIOR
Knowflake Posts: 55
From: new zealand
Registered: Feb 2005
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posted December 12, 2005 02:55 AM
here's a poem future uncertain~imagine~ give it a backbone
this message you hold,
then give it a name
it is written within,
or just write whatever,come's to your mind
then fix it up later,there's plenty of time. kiaora(to your well being) IP: Logged |
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