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From: UK
Registered: Oct 2004

posted November 27, 2005 05:21 PM         

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You

I try to write
About you and me
Try to put
in flowery words
What passed for us the last six years
The words arent coming
awkward, clumsy, strange
stupid, like it isnt meant to be
Of course it isn’t
And that hole is there
That old familiar hole
Disappointing, yet strangely comforting
This is the only poem I can write
About you.
It FEELS like you.

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From: London
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posted November 28, 2005 01:30 AM         

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This is brillant and beautiful Monika, so...so wonderful to read something from you.
You're a treasure beyond measure.

I hope this finds you with a smile in your heart and the knowing that I am thinking about you and giving thanks to the Divine for this amazing person that makes this life shine.

Akash

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posted November 28, 2005 01:41 AM         

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From: UK
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posted November 28, 2005 03:55 PM         

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Akash you're back! Yay! you always say the nicest things, even at my poor attempts at poetry! It does indeed feel good to know that you are thinking about me, I've been wondering how you are too. I hope things are OK with you.

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posted November 28, 2005 10:38 PM         

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posted November 30, 2005 01:09 AM         

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For me?

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