Posts: 38
From: new zealand
Registered: Feb 2005

posted December 03, 2005 04:36 PM         

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I'M THE TOUGHEST(bar room brawler)

A boy he sit's on a cream stand
He wait's there every morning,
For his father to pick him up
On a blue ford,model t truck,
No one will come this morning
His father's just passed away,
He is waiting,singing to himself
And kicking his feet away,
I'm still waiting for you dad
To drive around that corner,
I'm missing your lollies
The long drive in your truck,
But since youv'e been gone
Time's have really been tough,
And i've hurt so many people
You said never give up,never give up son,
Never give up.

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From: ohio
Registered: Aug 2004

posted December 03, 2005 10:28 PM         

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This is powerful. I'm impressed.

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From: ohio
Registered: Aug 2004

posted December 08, 2005 08:54 AM         

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*bump* for RAINBOW WARRIOR.

How many days ago did I read this? It's still with me. What I love the best is the way the title plays on the poem. This one has a very distinct feel to it.

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Posts: 2473
From: Ontario Canada
Registered: Jun 2005

posted December 08, 2005 10:07 AM         

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I missed this! Thanks for the bump, it is awesome!

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Posts: 38
From: new zealand
Registered: Feb 2005

posted December 11, 2005 03:04 AM         

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thank's,this is about my uncle,alot of us young one's went through it with him,and i couldnt forgive him for dragging us in,and then alot of old people told us the truth to his anger, and like linda said the truth
set us free.

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LOVE*PEACE&RESPECT

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