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Topic: Poetry in progress....
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Dynamic_Stillness
Knowflake Posts: 199
From: London
Registered: Dec 2004
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posted December 07, 2005 12:57 PM
 
YOU a possibility, twinkle in the star of eternity
Mirage of memories, insecure and afraid
Melting iceberg in the sea of space
Vast, timeless no need to be free
Yet contracted-bound this mechanism: ‘me’
Hopeful, hopeless- never here now
Yet infinite, blissful wordless wow!IP: Logged |
kismetkaizen
Knowflake Posts: 4
From: Hayward, CA, USA
Registered: Dec 2005
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posted December 07, 2005 02:30 PM
Please go on...------------------
Sun in Aries, Moon in Pisces, Leo rising... your fellow sojourner in this earthly plane. IP: Logged |
Dynamic_Stillness
Knowflake Posts: 199
From: London
Registered: Dec 2004
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posted December 07, 2005 03:11 PM
Dear kismetkaizenThank you for reading and the encouragment to continue...
May this find you tasting the sweetness of your being. D.S IP: Logged |
kismetkaizen
Knowflake Posts: 4
From: Hayward, CA, USA
Registered: Dec 2005
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posted December 07, 2005 11:09 PM
Hi there!Here's something I wrote, oh, years and years ago, when I was still in college, after breaking up with a boyfriend: Untitled My dear, you cannot bend my will
nor stop my heart that loves you still.
The end is far, the feeling strong
until the next man comes along.
*** =)I'll post a longer poem of mine next time. Meanwhile, Dynamic_Stillness, keep on writing! ------------------
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26taurus
Moderator Posts: 9776
From: the stars
Registered: Jun 2004
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posted December 08, 2005 03:24 AM
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Dynamic_Stillness
Knowflake Posts: 199
From: London
Registered: Dec 2004
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posted December 08, 2005 04:12 AM
Thank you both!Eternal Hugs! D.S IP: Logged |
future_uncertain
Knowflake Posts: 2069
From: ohio
Registered: Aug 2004
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posted December 08, 2005 09:04 AM
I like this part, Dynamic: quote:
Yet contracted-bound this mechanism: ‘me’
This poem is a little gem! kismetkaizen~ I enjoyed your little poem, too. Reminds me of Dorothy Parker. Here's one of hers: By the time you swear your his,
Shivering and sighing,
And he vows his passion is
Infinite, undying--
Lady, make a note of this:
One of you is lying. Excuse the interruption! This thread got me excited!  IP: Logged |
Dynamic_Stillness
Knowflake Posts: 199
From: London
Registered: Dec 2004
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posted December 08, 2005 11:14 AM
Thank you for gracing this thread future_uncertain.IP: Logged |
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