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Topic: Dream Girl
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Dynamic_Stillness
Knowflake Posts: 207
From: London
Registered: Dec 2004
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posted December 11, 2005 11:06 AM
 
It was just a dream but it felt so real
You loved me and wanted to be with me
I wake up now but feel the pain
of not knowing who you are or how to find you
Where can I search, which heaven, which realm, which earth
I felt you and for once trusted the tellings of my heart.
I knew you loved me, I knew you loved me, I knew you loved me
Why did I have to wake up here in my bed on this Saturday morning, mourning,longing for you...IP: Logged |
lotusheartone
Knowflake Posts: 3435
From: piopolis, quebec canada
Registered: Jul 2005
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posted December 11, 2005 11:08 AM
Absolutely beautiful
and if you can SEE it
it will BELove and Light to YOU IP: Logged |
future_uncertain
Knowflake Posts: 2079
From: ohio
Registered: Aug 2004
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posted December 11, 2005 11:23 AM
Dynamic... as always, I love it. *edited* Thanks for reading my poem, Dynamic! IP: Logged |
Dynamic_Stillness
Knowflake Posts: 207
From: London
Registered: Dec 2004
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posted December 11, 2005 11:35 AM
Lotusheartone, please accept this message with all my love...I'm humbled and thankful for your blessings.Future_Uncertain, I've read your poem and it's breathtakingly BE(YOU)tiful. I was amazed at how closley it mirrored everything I felt and I was left speechless after reading it.
I can only bow before the spirit of your creativitiy with such awe and respect. You're a gift to this life. I pray that this finds you tasting the sweetness of your being. D.S IP: Logged |
future_uncertain
Knowflake Posts: 2079
From: ohio
Registered: Aug 2004
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posted December 11, 2005 11:42 AM
Thank you, Dynamic!  Isn't it crazy how much alike these two poems are??? Almost eerie... That is such a horrible feeling though, isn't it? I'm glad that for me it is long in the past. I hope to never feel that way again. If you are going through this now yourself, I hope that time will be kind and find you feeling better soon!  IP: Logged |
Dynamic_Stillness
Knowflake Posts: 207
From: London
Registered: Dec 2004
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posted December 11, 2005 12:42 PM
Future_Uncertain... reminded me of a song that goes something like...Like A Comet
Blazing 'Cross The Evening Sky
Like A Rainbow
Fading In The Twinkling Of An Eye
Shiny And Sparkly
And Splendidly Bright
Here One Day
Gone One Night Like The Loss Of Sunlight
On A Cloudy Afternoon
Like A Castle
Built Upon A Sandy Beach
Like A Perfect Flower
That Is Just Beyond Your Reach Born To Amuse, To Inspire, To Delight
Here One Day
Gone One Night Like A Sunset
Dying With The Rising Of The Moon
Gone Too Soon... and whenever you have time feel free to visit my blogspace www.akashom.blogspot.com IP: Logged |
sweetlibra
Knowflake Posts: 828
From:
Registered: Oct 2004
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posted December 11, 2005 11:56 PM
good one Dynamic  IP: Logged |
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