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posted March 19, 2006 03:44 PM         

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as the stars begin to quickly fade
and i begin to see the light
i drown myself in a pool of darkness
knowing that its not right
as the burning of my human flesh
begins to trouble my soul
all i see around me is a world with many holes
as i choose the path i'll walk i pray in my defense
oh lord please help me make this world make sense

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posted March 19, 2006 03:48 PM         

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if you have any questions or comment please feel free.

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posted March 19, 2006 04:05 PM         

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We go to great depths to rise to great heights.

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posted March 20, 2006 07:01 AM         

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all i see around me is a world with many holes

thats wht I see..

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posted March 21, 2006 05:00 PM         

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thank you 26 for your comment i appreciate it
and sweetlibra i thank you as well and you seem to understand what it's like to just see the world turn to evil and distruction as im sure everyone does

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posted March 26, 2006 04:50 PM         

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Yeah..I think I know what you are saying.
It is hard when you can see how it should or could be...it is so simple...so Clear...
To You...
And it hurts to the very depths of your Soul..
How can others not realize the wonder all about them?
How can they continue to only think of themselves...
And feeling so spiritually aware the mortal flesh can feel like a confining prison at times...
And you feel helpless in this form to make them see...and life is not easy in a body...
God doing the human experience...limited by the parameters of this world.
Ok..hope that made sense,
Just feeling pensively reflective today.

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