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solar_third
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Registered: Oct 2005

posted January 31, 2007 11:41 AM

The loch moon snakes to Strathbeg’s lips,
shedding light across her smile;
their glowing curvature of love
is stripped by herons’ dreaming reeds.
Tonight, by silent fox’s wile,
he’ll taste that kiss after he feeds.

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I'm in the middle of revisioning this draft (including the title), but I thought I'd post its current incarnation here, so you can read it and comment. I actually post most of my efforts at the http://www.everypoet.org/pffa/ under the same username, but have been inactive of late. Thanks to Venus in my sign this week, though, I'm back in the habit.

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sue g
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Posts: 8366
From: former land of the leprechaun
Registered: Sep 2004

posted February 01, 2007 08:47 AM

solar

Glad you are "back in the habit"

lovely work!

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