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posted February 17, 2007 09:29 AM            

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posted February 19, 2007 02:24 PM              

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I don't know why but while reading your poem, I kept getting images of an insect trapped in amber. Maybe it's because of the last two lines. Your imagery is vivid and profound. I've been told that a good poem has good images,and yours surely does. Beautiful!

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Sun in Aries, Moon in Pisces, Leo rising... your fellow sojourner in this earthly plane.

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posted February 20, 2007 02:24 AM              

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wonderful imagery connection to the feeling, Steve.
the spiders as ghostly as his cloudy trail?

Poetry that makes you dig deeper.

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posted February 20, 2007 09:21 AM            

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Thank you.

The last two lines are describing
the cataract.

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