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posted March 18, 2008 11:47 AM         

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Crash crockery while the coast is clear.
Seashell sunshine shimmies sheer,
Yet your yacht yaws throughout the year;
Face fabled fancies, finish fear.
Golgotha, great ground, grins so greedy,
Numbskulled nemesis, never needy;
Quaint queens querulous questions query,
Blue blood blighted, blithe but bleary;
Keen kestrels kirtle kieselguhr,
Oracle orders ornate oars;
Landlord's love lost long in lore,
Megalomaniac merits more.
Hunter hikes on hurried heels,
Zander zaps with Zionist zeal.
Vervain's verve veers venom's vein,
White wine waits, on withering wane;
Take time the talisman to tame,
Respect revisited remains;
Pry prizes prior to presentation,
Join jocularity, joy, jubilation,
Defame, deride, deploy damnation,
Allow alleged alliteration:
Inked Indians' invoked indigo,
Egalitarian's eggshell ego,
Usurers' useful unity;
X marks the spot for all to see.

(C) ME, Mar. 2008.

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posted March 18, 2008 07:28 PM         

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Amazing use of alliteration...

You've invoked my indigo.

Something strange about this poem...

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posted March 18, 2008 08:29 PM         

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I had to go through the alphabet to ensure you didn't miss any letters.

Virgo Moon

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posted March 18, 2008 08:32 PM         

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AG, you crahzy...

(don't even try and stare at that 'h' for too long... I put it there on purpose... LOL)

This was so different! I love the images it brings to mind!

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posted March 20, 2008 01:44 AM         

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Awesome!!!!

Fun!

IMage provoking!

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posted March 20, 2008 08:35 AM         

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Awh, thanks, guys...

I thought it might be fun for Lexi fans. Try saying it fast

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posted March 20, 2008 10:45 AM         

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pffft...ain't no thang!

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