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Pearlty
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posted November 06, 2008 07:37 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Pearlty     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
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Heart--Shaped Cross
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posted November 12, 2008 06:00 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Heart--Shaped Cross     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
This is beautiful.

Reminds me of "Splendor in the Grass".

Is it autobiographical?

Did you think you caught Jesus?

I almost had him once...

Lost him under a clump of seaweed.

But then I thought...

Eh.. better just let him be.

Thats when he swam right to me.

Okay, not really.

But that would be sweet!

Really...

I'm just sittin on the dock of the bay..

playing with my pole...

People closing up their shutters tell me a storm's coming.

I see the clouds, but there's still some blue...

I'll take my chances and enjoy the rest of the day.

I never did mind a walk in the rain.

It was the walk before the rain I never could manage.

blah...

Beautiful poem, though.

Thank you for it!

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Pearlty
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posted November 12, 2008 08:46 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Pearlty     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
HSC~ Autobiographical? yes and no..

Mostly metaphorical..

I did catch a fish once, but to my dismay it wasn't Jesus..

I wouldn't mind going fishing again, so peaceful, and the striking colors reflected off the water...so full or life, and inspiration..

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posted November 12, 2008 04:35 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Heart--Shaped Cross     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
"I wouldn't mind going fishing again,"

Are we still being metaphorical?

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Pearlty
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posted November 12, 2008 06:04 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Pearlty     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Maybe a little...

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