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Topic: "Baby" -- and other Fragments
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Heart--Shaped Cross Newflake Posts: 0 From: Registered: Nov 2010
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posted November 11, 2008 05:39 AM
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posted November 12, 2008 06:33 PM
I liked this..was it a recollection of yours? if you don't mind my asking...Anyways that last paragraph was lovely and heartfelt... IP: Logged |
Heart--Shaped Cross Newflake Posts: 0 From: Registered: Nov 2010
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posted November 12, 2008 07:47 PM
The last paragraph was written to my girlfriend...The "Sarah" one was to a friend whose boyfriend cheated on her. (psst.... Her real name is not Sarah.) The others, along with the other threads i posted here last night, were all written a couple of nights ago (when the cable, including the internet connection, went out, lol). They are totally disconnected little paragraphs, intended to be complete mini-works in themselves. Thanks for reading! IP: Logged |
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posted November 13, 2008 10:30 AM
Thanks for the explanation... IP: Logged |
future_uncertain Knowflake Posts: 193 From: Registered: May 2009
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posted November 14, 2008 03:02 PM
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Heart--Shaped Cross Newflake Posts: 0 From: Registered: Nov 2010
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posted November 14, 2008 05:38 PM
Hey, FU! future, did you see my poem "writer's block" ?? I know how you feel. smoking a little pot helps me to get the juices flowing sometimes. all this stuff is pot-induced... i just start with an image, anything, and start writing, just images or word combinations i like, without worrying if they are connected. then i water the seeds; connect the dots its all good. show us what you have, future. i know you have it, but maybe you hold back just start anywhere. you can do it!
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MysticMelody Moderator Posts: 1063 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted November 14, 2008 08:51 PM
FU too HSC you SOB!(I mean, my Sweet hOney Bee....) IP: Logged |
future_uncertain Knowflake Posts: 193 From: Registered: May 2009
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posted November 14, 2008 11:14 PM
Ha!: "All this stuff is pot induced." I love it! It's been forever, but I definitely get cravings. So, every once in a while...I think my writer's block is somehow related to sex. I'm not going for vulgarity here, but I know I can say it straight up to a scorp. Everything I write ends up being about sex in one way or another. And I think about sex probably 80% of my waking hours. Weird thing is, I have total access, but... it's complicated. Anyway, this is a bit of a tangent, I know, but it's relevant to the discussion of my writer's block. And mud... I'm noticing this theme in most of my writing lately and even in some dreams. WTF?? I feel like an animal...
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future_uncertain Knowflake Posts: 193 From: Registered: May 2009
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posted November 14, 2008 11:16 PM
... all of which reminds me, yes, I did see your poem... interesting when we're discussing the writing/sex frustration ordeal.I'll post my most recent in a sec. It leaves me far from satisfied, but it's a small step just to get something down. IP: Logged |
D for Defiant Knowflake Posts: 588 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted November 24, 2008 08:58 PM
I like these fragments, HSC. I enjoyed reading them. They are all very inspiring. I am moved by the final paragraph, the baby part, and the following is deeply introspective and on the verge of spiritual revelation...I hope I've put it right. I don't know how to describe exactly how I feel... quote: Somewhere between animal and angel, awkwardly daring great and independent things, there is the man. Discovering himself in the car park, beside the cereal (in the supermarket), or underneath a starless sky. Never taking the possibility of existence for granted. In him is safeguarded all the secrets of nature and supernature. Take care of him. Be always discovering him.
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Heart--Shaped Cross Newflake Posts: 0 From: Registered: Nov 2010
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posted November 24, 2008 11:19 PM
Thank you. IP: Logged |
Heart--Shaped Cross Newflake Posts: 0 From: Registered: Nov 2010
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posted November 24, 2008 11:21 PM
I think you'd like this one: http://www.linda-goodman.com/ubb/Forum10/HTML/003334.html IP: Logged |
D for Defiant Knowflake Posts: 588 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted November 28, 2008 09:51 PM
Much thanks for providing the link, HSC Keep up the good work! D xxxxxxxxx IP: Logged |