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Topic: Lost
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raven1812 Knowflake Posts: 35 From: Nashville, TN Registered: Oct 2008
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posted January 03, 2009 03:27 PM
This was written during a darker time in life... Lost is the feeling Of when you're trying To get back to yourself But the past conditioning Haunts you like a shadow And corrupting your true self While destroying everything that is good And all that matters Lost is a situation That needs to be taken Back into control From a shadow self That really isn't true To one's own being Without the courage to be The one that one is supposed to be Lost is a battle That rages within one's internal being Fighting and struggling to keep Or regain control of true self Battling the darker self for the lighter self Striving to be the one true to self But hurting those you love while battling the demons of conditioning Of the past years of a messy life To regain control of true self And to love again...
------------------ Life's too short. Live lively! :-) IP: Logged |
charmainec Moderator Posts: 577 From: S.A Registered: Dec 2007
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posted January 03, 2009 06:19 PM
------------------ What lies behind us, and what lies before us are tiny matters compared to what lies within us ~Ralph Waldo Emerson IP: Logged |
Pearlty Knowflake Posts: 355 From: Registered: Nov 2006
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posted January 03, 2009 11:03 PM
Love and light at last...very good IP: Logged |
raven1812 Knowflake Posts: 35 From: Nashville, TN Registered: Oct 2008
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posted January 04, 2009 01:00 AM
Thank You, Jen. Yes, love and light at last. :-)
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26taurus Knowflake Posts: 15323 From: * Registered: Jun 2004
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posted January 05, 2009 09:52 AM
Awesome. IP: Logged |
broken dream Knowflake Posts: 46 From: charlotte nc. us Registered: Sep 2008
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posted January 06, 2009 02:36 AM
Well written! Very Beautiful!------------------ Your beauty is not limited to your outter shell but it is extended through your good nature IP: Logged |
raven1812 Knowflake Posts: 35 From: Nashville, TN Registered: Oct 2008
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posted January 07, 2009 04:09 PM
Thanks, 26taurus and broken dream. ------------------ Life's too short. Live lively! :-) IP: Logged |
MysticMelody Moderator Posts: 4788 From: Registered: Dec 2005
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posted January 07, 2009 08:07 PM
Perfect. I can relate to that... yesterday. Or at least very recently. It's funny how you think you could never lose that faith again and then the Universe throws some Plutonic energy at you and you are destined "to fall at last in trembling fear before the threat of Pluto's ominous tomb like silence consumed by inconsolable sadness, and the bleakness of despair" as Linda says her poem, "Planet" in Love Signs. (That some fabulous poster posted for us in Soul Unions to remind us all...)
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raven1812 Knowflake Posts: 35 From: Nashville, TN Registered: Oct 2008
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posted January 08, 2009 01:01 AM
Yeah... Most, if not all, of us can relate to this in one way or another. It is the conditioning of my past that needs to be confronted and dealt with in order to rise back up to where I belong again. Time, tearing down, and rising from the ashes like a Phoenix... Or like a magician transforming from the lesser to the greater... ------------------ Life's too short. Live lively! :-) IP: Logged |
Charlotte Knowflake Posts: 1827 From: USA Registered: Apr 2004
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posted January 08, 2009 01:18 AM
Gorgeous! Light over darkness... :-)'s IP: Logged |
Charlotte Knowflake Posts: 1827 From: USA Registered: Apr 2004
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posted January 08, 2009 05:03 AM
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raven1812 Knowflake Posts: 35 From: Nashville, TN Registered: Oct 2008
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posted January 08, 2009 05:08 AM
Charly! ------------------ Life's too short. Live lively! :-)
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