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Topic: Soft Contusion
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Pearlty
Knowflake Posts: 433
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Registered: Nov 2006
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posted February 11, 2009 10:01 AM
 
A doorway between where both worlds mysteriously collideThe forceful, and soft contusion felt inside The deity of two distinct personalities clash A castle floating in the air revealed in a flash A time set precisely on a water logged clock And so the story begins..... IP: Logged |
MysticMelody
Moderator Posts: 4933
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Registered: Dec 2005
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posted February 11, 2009 11:58 AM
hmmmm..... IP: Logged |
Heart--Shaped Cross
Knowflake Posts: 9886
From: 11/6/78 11:38am Boston, MA
Registered: Aug 2004
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posted February 11, 2009 02:47 PM
There's something here. I like it.  IP: Logged |
Charlotte
Knowflake Posts: 1879
From: USA
Registered: Apr 2004
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posted February 11, 2009 03:53 PM
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Quinnie
Knowflake Posts: 1365
From: on a chair beside a window
Registered: Jul 2002
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posted February 11, 2009 04:24 PM
lovely IP: Logged |
Pearlty
Knowflake Posts: 433
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Registered: Nov 2006
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posted February 11, 2009 09:56 PM
Thanks everyone...  IP: Logged |
broken dream
Knowflake Posts: 49
From: charlotte nc. us
Registered: Sep 2008
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posted February 11, 2009 11:24 PM
This is so beautiful. Very well writen. Hope to see more of your work soon.------------------
Your beauty is not limited to your outter shell but it is extended through your good nature IP: Logged |
raven1812
Knowflake Posts: 74
From: Nashville, TN
Registered: Oct 2008
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posted February 12, 2009 12:34 AM
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26taurus
Knowflake Posts: 15877
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Registered: Jun 2004
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posted February 12, 2009 03:06 AM
lovely, warm & sensual.  IP: Logged |
Pearlty
Knowflake Posts: 433
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Registered: Nov 2006
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posted February 12, 2009 07:36 AM
Thanks Broken Dream, very kind of you.You know I haven't wrote in awhile, and this was a little hard to get out. I'm half blaming it on my new journal, I received at Christmas, it's too pretty, and the pages are constructed of this well made paper, with an inlet of some design punched on each piece... It's not my usual worn out notebook..I can't type my thoughts out on the computer, I have to hand write. There is something in that connection, with me, my terrible scribbly handwriting, and the paper. Raven and 26T..thanks xxoo IP: Logged |
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